Aight QUERY
General question here, just want to check up with y'all and see if I'm making a Stu out of myself or not.
If you can't read any of that shit let me fill you kind ladies and gents in with the info:
NAME: Xeriss (seris with an x in it LOL.)
ORGANIZATION NUMBER (obviously not canon): 15
SEX: FUCKING YES
AGE: 19 ( :) )
WEAPON: Cross Wind (a cross bow with embellished bullshit to look "organization"-y. Better example shown here--in picture it is shown as a staff because I figure I can be gay and make it like fold out into a cross bow or some stupid shit or whatev LIKE IT ALL MATTERS ITS A GAME WITH DISNEY AND MAGIC AND THE TWO POWERS COMBINED FORM ULTRA GAY FANON LIBERTIES)
Now on to all the other shit that's written on there that you can't see because of my chicken shit handwriting; SPECIAL MOVES.
-the ability to add elements to the arrow for a shot
-the ability to cast a defense/wall spell and attack from behind
-at a close distance, the shot from the arrow can inflict critical damage
the one "super move" there is GOING ARIAL and super-charging a shot from above and eliminating(???!?!?!) the enemy below. All of the above moves and attacks are completely and totally dodge-able.
Now for the weaknesses:
Xeriss is,
-Impervious (right word?) to arial attacks.. Uhh... Meaning that Xeriss is totally open to an ass-kicking if attacked at the right moment. LIke all the organization members and their triangle "dodge this!" command.
-Slow to load arrow and fire a shot
-clumsey and has poor aim in most instances
-not very fast on foot
-is sometimes suspectable to drop his arrows WHILE loading his weapon, making him completely and totally defenseless--HIS WEAKEST MOVE
Anyway now I'm sure yall are reading this and thinking to yourselves "SOUNDS GAY, WHAT'S THIS FOR ANYWAY" well shut up for a minute, let me tell you, GOD don't swarm me all at once.
You see I like to do the fanart and the fanfic thing in collaboration sometimes when I am feeling especially retarded and/or in the mood, however I am notorious for creating some of the most awful characters and doing all sorts of dumb shit in my stories and art that I shouldn't SO I figured I should get some feedback prior to actually starting this project o' mine.
By definition, I realize that all self-insert fics and fanarts are Mary-sue/stu by default and I can't really do much to change that. However, like all ambitious writers and artists I figure I may as well try and tackle a bull without grabbing it by the horns first; so hence I ask for your thoughts community.
Is Xeriss a stu? Any glaring problems you see with the design? Am I completely retarded for even posting here with this?
BROIL ME KHRANTS, UNNGGGHHH
If you can't read any of that shit let me fill you kind ladies and gents in with the info:
NAME: Xeriss (seris with an x in it LOL.)
ORGANIZATION NUMBER (obviously not canon): 15
SEX: FUCKING YES
AGE: 19 ( :) )
WEAPON: Cross Wind (a cross bow with embellished bullshit to look "organization"-y. Better example shown here--in picture it is shown as a staff because I figure I can be gay and make it like fold out into a cross bow or some stupid shit or whatev LIKE IT ALL MATTERS ITS A GAME WITH DISNEY AND MAGIC AND THE TWO POWERS COMBINED FORM ULTRA GAY FANON LIBERTIES)
Now on to all the other shit that's written on there that you can't see because of my chicken shit handwriting; SPECIAL MOVES.
-the ability to add elements to the arrow for a shot
-the ability to cast a defense/wall spell and attack from behind
-at a close distance, the shot from the arrow can inflict critical damage
the one "super move" there is GOING ARIAL and super-charging a shot from above and eliminating(???!?!?!) the enemy below. All of the above moves and attacks are completely and totally dodge-able.
Now for the weaknesses:
Xeriss is,
-Impervious (right word?) to arial attacks.. Uhh... Meaning that Xeriss is totally open to an ass-kicking if attacked at the right moment. LIke all the organization members and their triangle "dodge this!" command.
-Slow to load arrow and fire a shot
-clumsey and has poor aim in most instances
-not very fast on foot
-is sometimes suspectable to drop his arrows WHILE loading his weapon, making him completely and totally defenseless--HIS WEAKEST MOVE
Anyway now I'm sure yall are reading this and thinking to yourselves "SOUNDS GAY, WHAT'S THIS FOR ANYWAY" well shut up for a minute, let me tell you, GOD don't swarm me all at once.
You see I like to do the fanart and the fanfic thing in collaboration sometimes when I am feeling especially retarded and/or in the mood, however I am notorious for creating some of the most awful characters and doing all sorts of dumb shit in my stories and art that I shouldn't SO I figured I should get some feedback prior to actually starting this project o' mine.
By definition, I realize that all self-insert fics and fanarts are Mary-sue/stu by default and I can't really do much to change that. However, like all ambitious writers and artists I figure I may as well try and tackle a bull without grabbing it by the horns first; so hence I ask for your thoughts community.
Is Xeriss a stu? Any glaring problems you see with the design? Am I completely retarded for even posting here with this?
BROIL ME KHRANTS, UNNGGGHHH