(no subject)
Okay, I'm sure this has been ranted about before, directly or no, but it demands restating.
The African girl turned to the Filipino.
LOSE. AND. FAIL.
There is no Africa in Kingdom Hearts. The closet there is the Pride Lands, and that's all animals. There is no Philippines, either. DIE.
Of course, in a fic where this was the second paragraph, I really shouldn't have been surprised.
I am a girl of 16 with medium, 3 inches past my shoulders, length, layered black hair with red highlights and bangs. A small section of my hair in the back had a dark blue and red wrap around it and at the end had a green feather so you couldn’t see that part of my hair at all. However, that wrap had grown to about five inches past my shoulders and hung in front of me. I had milk chocolate colored skin and was about 5’6, which makes me fairly tall. My eyes have to be the most unique thing on me as they are blood red. Some say it’s what makes me look more fierce than others but to a point I really don’t care (although when I’m being bothered, all I have to do is look at them and that person will leave me alone). I wore a dark green midriff shirt that went halfway up my back, had no sleeves, and had a hood. My pants were low rise camos that I rubber banded so that they wouldn’t drag on the floor. I had on high top matching camo colored converse tennis shoes that I folded at the sides and pushed the tongue down and tied the laces around them (the whole purpose of this was to not have to tie my shoes because when you fight you don’t want to trip over yourself and get killed). On my wrists were black wrist bands and I had a green one near my shoulder. In my ears were silver hoops and I wore my lucky silver necklace that was a heart with zircon jewels around it.
Mickey H. Mouse that's a monster of a paragraph. I have to give them credit, though, for the shoe and pant-leg thing. Even if its silly and supurfluous detail. Also, how does a shirt that goes half-way up your back have a hood? It her head half-way up her back? Questions, questions...
I think I need to spork this beast. *files that away for tomorrow*
The African girl turned to the Filipino.
LOSE. AND. FAIL.
There is no Africa in Kingdom Hearts. The closet there is the Pride Lands, and that's all animals. There is no Philippines, either. DIE.
Of course, in a fic where this was the second paragraph, I really shouldn't have been surprised.
I am a girl of 16 with medium, 3 inches past my shoulders, length, layered black hair with red highlights and bangs. A small section of my hair in the back had a dark blue and red wrap around it and at the end had a green feather so you couldn’t see that part of my hair at all. However, that wrap had grown to about five inches past my shoulders and hung in front of me. I had milk chocolate colored skin and was about 5’6, which makes me fairly tall. My eyes have to be the most unique thing on me as they are blood red. Some say it’s what makes me look more fierce than others but to a point I really don’t care (although when I’m being bothered, all I have to do is look at them and that person will leave me alone). I wore a dark green midriff shirt that went halfway up my back, had no sleeves, and had a hood. My pants were low rise camos that I rubber banded so that they wouldn’t drag on the floor. I had on high top matching camo colored converse tennis shoes that I folded at the sides and pushed the tongue down and tied the laces around them (the whole purpose of this was to not have to tie my shoes because when you fight you don’t want to trip over yourself and get killed). On my wrists were black wrist bands and I had a green one near my shoulder. In my ears were silver hoops and I wore my lucky silver necklace that was a heart with zircon jewels around it.
Mickey H. Mouse that's a monster of a paragraph. I have to give them credit, though, for the shoe and pant-leg thing. Even if its silly and supurfluous detail. Also, how does a shirt that goes half-way up your back have a hood? It her head half-way up her back? Questions, questions...
I think I need to spork this beast. *files that away for tomorrow*