HP Fic: Out of Ashes (Harry/Draco) (PG)

Mar 28, 2011 18:00

Title: Out of Ashes
Pairing: Harry/Draco (preslash)
Rating: PG
Beta(s): trialia and maja_li
Era: Post-Hogwarts, EWE
Word Count 4,014
Warning(s): none
Summary: Draco never thought he'd be grateful to an arsonist.

Disclaimer: This piece of fiction is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to ( Read more... )

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kayoko March 29 2011, 00:23:45 UTC
*squee* That was sheer fluff with a pinch of angst! Gawd, you nail that genre down to an art!!!

I love the changes you did with the interview. I felt that Draco's emotions were much more flushed out and I knew exactly what was going on.

I'm still grinning like a loon at Harry's lame non-pick-up-line. Hahaha. Draco totally fell for it. Don't deny it. It charmed him!

Thanks for sharing!

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khasael March 29 2011, 01:03:19 UTC
Thank you very much for reading (and again, for your feedback on the first half)!

And he was totally charmed, in spite of himself :D

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brinimc March 29 2011, 02:02:56 UTC
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, that was perfect! It was the right amount of angsty and fluffy! I love all the emotions and Harry trying to help out Draco. Poor Draco, being in a fire again. that would be so sad for him!!! And yet it still had the cute stuff like Harry's "pick-up line." Hahahaha, poor embarrassed Harry.

This is so awesome! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!
*Squish*
You are awesome!!!!!!!!

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khasael March 29 2011, 02:05:39 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

*squishes you back* You're the awesome one!

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often_astray March 29 2011, 03:23:16 UTC
Very nice, I like how wary they are with each other in the beginning. When Draco gets the chest and does a complete 180 throws Harry for a loop is quite humorous!

Also, I wonder about the backstory of such a tradition, besides of course the connection that Draco could keep with his parents.

Wonderful flangst, darling!! <3

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khasael March 29 2011, 17:28:37 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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talekayler March 29 2011, 14:11:00 UTC
Awww! ♥

That one little box is more significant that Harry could imagine, particularly as he doesn't have anything left from his childhood. And it's so Harry to return it, and understand what it means. ♥

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khasael March 29 2011, 17:29:17 UTC
Exactly! Thanks for reading and commenting :D *squishes you*

And I love your icon, btw.

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talekayler March 30 2011, 01:28:41 UTC
Bleedy made it! \o/

*squishes you back*

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vanessawolfie March 29 2011, 20:28:14 UTC
This is awesome. I loved the way there is so much beginning and then this short, little hopeful ending.

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khasael March 30 2011, 00:34:01 UTC
Thank you so much!

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