[255]: "Becoming"; Kairi, Naminé

[euphonious_glow]

Title: Becoming
Challenge: [255] Tabula Rasa
Characters: Kairi, Naminé
Word Count: 331
Notes: Kairi has a lot of potential, even though she was underdeveloped in the games. I also feel an attachment to Naminé; somehow, I always end up writing about her. Connecting the two of them is interesting

Comments

[mirrorbrothers]

This is how stream-of-consciousness should be. It wanders beautifully, and yet somehow, as you say, everything connects.

[euphonious_glow]

Thank you! Kairi's "blank past" intrigues me, and I thought that was something that could connect her to Naminé. I also got this imagine of the sky and sea becoming one in a downpour, kind of symbolic. Naminé is the air to Kairi's water.

[minntaka]

I know this is meant to be about Kairi and Naminé, but Larxene's cameo in this is absolutely perfect and stood out to me. I love how you have depicted her cruelty and used it to forcibly compare Naminé and Kairi's loneliness ♥

[euphonious_glow]

I originally considered writing about Larxene for this challenge. I just love her, so it's fun to have her pop up in different ways. I'm really glad you liked it! :)

[synchroshatter]

I really like how closely you manage to link Kairi and Naminé, and yet keep the whole piece in a pretty simplistic style. And I especially like how both of them contrast at the end with Larxene- her appearance works even better because it's so brief. Really enjoyed this!