[Challenge 246]: Stroke of Midnight

Nov 21, 2010 18:23


Title: Stroke of Midnight
Challenge: [246] Remembrance
Word Count: 260
Spoilers: slight, for the beginning of BBS
Notes: An interpretation of sorts, concerning D-Links.

he remembers a woman with tawny hair and rose lips )

ibuberu

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spoke November 22 2010, 01:03:13 UTC
Poor Terra. He is much too hard on himself for all the wrong reasons, and I love how clearly you've captured that here.

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ibuberu November 22 2010, 07:52:19 UTC
Thank you so much! (:

I agree with you about Terra too! He's a sad character, yet I like how he can endure everything in stride and is determined to continue on, despite whatever happens to him.

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minntaka November 22 2010, 16:07:39 UTC
:( I just knew that 'Remembrance' would incur beautifully sad drabbles

I love your take on D-Links and how you subtly worked in how Terra is his own harshest critic. Great stuff - you captured him perfectly.

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ibuberu November 22 2010, 23:32:23 UTC
Thank you! I've always been intrigued by how they work :D

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synchroshatter November 23 2010, 20:47:29 UTC
This was an interesting take on the whole D-Link thing, and I think you managed to capture Terra very well. Especially at the end, which is all kinds of heartbreaking but kind of admirable as well in that he still keeps going. = )

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ibuberu November 24 2010, 10:14:42 UTC
Thank you! :D

That's what I love about Terra C:

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