Challenge 241

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The first time it happens, Isa is convinced that Lea is playing a prank on him.

He eyes the figure coolly, unimpressed. “Don’t you have anything better to do?”

Silence. The figure does nothing, only standing, only watching him.

Isa sighs. “Look-“

I’ve come to warn you.

The words falter in his mouth and Isa stops, uncertain. “What?”

Be careful

Comments

[scenotaphs]

Ffffffuuu. I loved this. Especially the closing, and the last lines of Isa and the ghost. There's this sense of building urgency, and I think it's brilliant for this (:

Thanks for sharing!

[06seconds_left]

Thank you!!! Mm, the minute I read the prompt, I immediately thought of Isa and Lea. It was a longer at first and having to cut it down to under 600 was not only hard, but it completely changed most of the drabble. Glad it worked out anyway, though. XD

Thanks for reading!

[trilies]

Oh, ow.
That last line most of all, right in the heart.

[06seconds_left]

Heehee. I'm glad. I love these two. Thanks for reading!

[kagome_angel]

This is wonderfully creepy. <3 Also, just a bit painful.

[06seconds_left]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.