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Challenge 234 Entry

Jul 27, 2010 12:49

TITLE: Bring Back the Sun
CHALLENG: 234 coping strategy
WORD COUNT: 586
NOTES: lj hates me ;_;

( but I dug you up a rainbow )

iki_teru

Comments 10

euphonious_glow July 27 2010, 17:57:16 UTC

Wow, really awesome topic to pick for the challenge. Saix is definitely one of the creepiest of the Org. and I've wondered what Kairi's experience in his captivity would have been like. This shows how she can be haunted just as much as the other two.

Nicely written.

iki_teru July 28 2010, 05:01:44 UTC

I, partly, blame crimsoncookie because before several in depth chats with her, I didn't really think too much about the Kairi-in-captive situation. >_>

and Saix creeps me out seven ways to next Tuesday. True fact.

Thank you for the read through and the comment :)

kaos_sparrow July 27 2010, 21:46:15 UTC

Your attempt at teh angst was perfectly creepyful and shivery. Awesomely awesome Kairi is awesome!

iki_teru July 28 2010, 05:02:42 UTC

:hugs you: I'm glad you think so, hun ♥

Kairi is pretty ding-dang-diddling awesome, huh?

06seconds_left July 28 2010, 00:38:35 UTC

Ooh, angsty. But very nice. XD

(Except, is it just me or is there something wrong with the formatting? The whole thing is one long paragraph.)

06seconds_left July 28 2010, 00:39:11 UTC

Okay. Never mind. It's fixed. Sorry! >.

iki_teru July 28 2010, 02:30:10 UTC

Lj hates my soul D: it jumbled my codes pretty terribly and I had to perform emergency surgery with my iPhone while at work. I am so sorry about that huge paragraph fiasco and thank you for trying to read through that :)

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iki_teru July 28 2010, 05:04:15 UTC

:D I am going to partly blame the terrifying aspect on the fact that I've been reading Stephen King's IT and some of the horror rubbed off. But I'm so glad you liked it!

scenotaphs July 28 2010, 07:51:24 UTC

This is...

...ajskdhsgf. No words. Everything about it is just so haunting and almost surreal. Great characterisation, a building sense of urgency, just...everything. Brilliant work!