Challenge 234

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And she imagines what it would be like if the drawings were true. If she were on the beach with him instead of here, she’d-

-watch the sunsets with him, help him build sand castles under the hot sun and lose every single race they run.

When Sora exclaims, one day, that when it get this hot, what’s the best thing to do? Well, get some coconuts and

Comments

[mirrorbrothers]

The ones that scare you are always the good ones. This is awesome.

[06seconds_left]

Haha, thank you. But nowhere near as scary-awesome as yours. :D

(Which, I forgot to mention, I'm adding to the mems. Hope that's okay with you.)

[mirrorbrothers]

I thought every entry got into the memories...?

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Oh. Sorry. I wasn't clear. I meant my journal's memories.

[iki_teru]

Namineeeee

Oh. Oh Hun, this was just lovely and a bit heartbreaking and just..... amazing ♥

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Thank you! :D I'm glad you like it (and that it didn't fell overdone or anything.)

[scenotaphs]

This is absolutely lovely; it's just so wistful and hopeful, until Marluxia appears in the end to pretty much pour cold water all over her dreams.

Oh my goodness Namine D: Just Namine.

[06seconds_left]

Exactly! That's the feeling I was aiming for anyway.

Thanks for reading and commenting! :D

[synchroshatter]

Poor Namine. I like how she's constructed this dream world that seems so much more vibrant than where she really is, and even how it's just her and Sora without the others- it's kind of selfish, but that makes it more realistic, I think. And the last two lines are heartbreaking!

[06seconds_left]

Exactly! I think that's the way she would see things. Maybe later on, she'd include Riku, but it's mostly Sora that she focuses on. At least, that's my opinion.

I'm really glad you like it. Thank you! :D

[naiyad]

Naaamineehehehe *sobsob* That was lovely. Very lonely, desperate and bitttersweet.

Still need to sob. T-T

[06seconds_left]

Aw, thanks Na! I'm grateful for the sobs. :D