Challenge Post - 217

[kagome_angel]

Challenge: [217] Letting Go
Title: Why Does the Caged Bird Sing?
Wordcount: 514
Notes: I’ve been taking inspiration from poems as well lately, as is obvious. *LOL* No real spoilers, unless you haven’t finished CoM or KHII.

Comments

[noiseandsound]

It made sense. :)
This is just beautiful. How you wrote Naminé was...heartbreaking, but not overdone.
“I made Sora a promise. I’ve… got to fix things.”
I really love it.

[kagome_angel]

Thank you very much; I'm glad that you like it. ^_^ I wanted it to be subtle and not overdone--I'm glad I succeeded. <333

[kaos_sparrow]

It absolutely made sense.

♥

[kagome_angel]

Yay! I'm happy that it did. I was nervous that I was doing one of those overly-poetic, confusing pieces. ^^ Thank you!

[synchroshatter]

Wow, I really don't know what to say. This was amazing, and Marluxia creeps me out majorly in this because he's just so eerie. And the one line sections about her stepping out of the castle and the last part were just heartbreaking. Poor Naminé. = (

[kagome_angel]

Hee--Marluxia will always be seen as a sort of... eerie guy to me, but I think that's one of the things I like best about him.

This is one of the things I have always wondered about her--if she ever became attached to Marluxia, in a sense.

Thank you for reading. ^_^ <3333

[wanderinghiatus]

Stockholm syndrome... shoulda used that in reference to Marluxia, but oh well...? But I really do love this drabbit <3

[kagome_angel]

It was used in reference to Marluxia, actually. XD;;;; She said it was because she had to fix things with Sora, and she felt she did, but there was another underlying reason, and Axel saw straight through it; thus, Stockholm syndrome. ^_^

Thank you~!

[roterstern]

It made sense.

It made me want to bawl.

NAMINÉ.

*hugs her tightly*

[kagome_angel]

*cuddles you* Thank you honey. <333 I love me some Naminé. *hugs her too!*