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Feb 20, 2007 19:05

Challenge:[95] Poison
Title: Testing
Word Count: 575
Spoilers: Mild. Pre-game Org. XIII
Notes: Just something I've had kicking around my head for awhile. It fit the challenge tolerably well.

( How to tell if your compound is going rancid. )

kashuarashi

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masakomoonshade February 21 2007, 03:20:20 UTC

Ha! That's funny--and good job on mentioning something so sweetly obscure as their sense of smell.

Wonderful job!

((I've got first comment.))

kashuarashi February 21 2007, 03:36:44 UTC

Thank you!

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kashuarashi February 21 2007, 03:37:38 UTC

Thanks! And yeah, this was originally going to be more Ienzo-centric, the Braig popped up and was all "HI!"

...and now he's sitting in the back of my head going "Told ya' so!"

*shakes head* *winks* Glad he amuses.

lindskaba February 21 2007, 03:32:28 UTC

Bwahahahaha. Hilarious. My favorite bit was, "Dear little Ienzo and his highly sensitive nose." Poor Ienzo XD

kashuarashi February 21 2007, 03:38:21 UTC

That was my favorite line too....<3

thano February 21 2007, 04:12:37 UTC

... I giggle lots. =DDD Yes I do. X3 This is hilarious/win/love take your pick. X333

kashuarashi February 21 2007, 04:30:02 UTC

Can I pick all three? :3

Glad you liked it!

thano February 21 2007, 04:43:41 UTC

=D Soitenly~

fox_the_kitsune February 21 2007, 04:24:54 UTC

I'm not sure why exactly... ok yeah, I do know... but I love the last line. Poor Ienzo.

kashuarashi February 21 2007, 04:31:34 UTC

Braig: What? No poor me? The little brat's probably going to poison my food!

Dilan: ...not that you asked for it.

*thumbs up* *grin* Thank you!