It has a really good flow, great dialogue and the characters are fantastic. I'm really glad you wrote this. Now I wonder what will be the companion piece for this one? :P
ok, you almost made me cry, which is totally unfair :P
Very nice. Since I don't know the chars, I came in somewhat blind, although I did read D's first piece and liked it as well, but you gave enough backstory to make it understandable.
AWWWW. But I'm really dancing inside that I almost made you cry. :P
I'm glad you enjoyed it and that the backstory at least provided some insight into their lives. It was fun to dip into the second generation of Hogwarts. :)
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It has a really good flow, great dialogue and the characters are fantastic. I'm really glad you wrote this. Now I wonder what will be the companion piece for this one? :P
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Very nice. Since I don't know the chars, I came in somewhat blind, although I did read D's first piece and liked it as well, but you gave enough backstory to make it understandable.
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I'm glad you enjoyed it and that the backstory at least provided some insight into their lives. It was fun to dip into the second generation of Hogwarts. :)
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