Darkness [Part 3]
Title: Darkness Part 3
Author: KeyJah
Characters/Pairings: Taeyeon, Yuri, Tiffany, Jessica, TaeNy, YulSic, TaeRi, JeTi, TaengSic, YulTi, small appearances by other SNSD members.
Length: Part 3/5
Genera: Angst, Romance, Smut.
Rating: R, NC-17
Summary: Darkness can have many layers with depths beyond what we can believe. What happens when you pull into it ( Read more... )
The chapter took a different direction than I originally planned ... I think ... in all honesty I can't quite remember all of my intentions that I had at first when I started writing this fic (meaning I should have wrote my ideas down somewhere so I wouldn't forget like the dummy I am LOL) JeTi make a great duo! Honestly, I don't know if anyone else would really fit the rolls like they do (Maybe YoonYul ... maybe ... ok no JeTi all the way!) Yes Yuri was very guilty for causing this mess but I think both of them are to be blamed equally.
I see your point there with Taeyeon being able to just say stop if she really didn't want anything more to happen so yes she is at fault just as equally in my opinion as well (maybe even a little more) If you consider the facts I think Taeyeon actually might be the more guilty party in all of this ... possibly ... I think once the next part comes out it will all unfold a lot better. The actions being not "equaly distributed" between the two girls may seem slightly harsh at the moment but the next part will end up ... I guess the term would be "evening the score board"? IDK ALL I KNOW IS WAIT AND IT'LL ALL BE GOOD~! LOOL
Oh and that last part, I guess I'll go back and re-phrase it so it's more clear. I apologize. Yuri was the one that was free. Jessica forced Yuri too look back to Taeyeon once she was free and Jessica was also looking at Taeyeon as well. Tiffany had come up next to Yuri on her other side to look at Taeyeon as well. So all three of them were looking at the girl who was alone and bound. Does that make more sense? Didn't mean to confuse you~
LMFAO~!~! I have no idea what your talking about unnie *smirk* Well I didn't mean to follow in your way~ My story deals with dark desire and vengence and just all of that dominance and submission and bondage and those crops (seriously I can't get over that when I wrote it omfg!!!! X_X) it just all ties in so well don't you think? ^^ D: I love your fics unnie <3 (oh pooltides I havent read those in a while *goes to read :P) technically I just love all of your writing ^^ my idol! Ahahaha I think it was more emotion than sex for this Chapter! The whole thing was an emotional rollercoaster and I agree that Chapter 2 would be my favourite as well (lets see if I can change that with the next two parts~ (;)
Thank you so much unnie <3 ^^
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