as the saying goes, you're my better half (part 1/?)

Apr 04, 2016 15:14

rating: nc-17
pairing: yunho/jaejoong
length: ~10100 wc
summary: yunjae college au

having friends definitely made the life of a nerd a lot better. )

fandom: dbsk, rating: nc-17, pairing: yunho/jaejoong

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pulsar_chan April 5 2016, 01:22:43 UTC

It has been a while since I've read something nice much less commented afterwards. This could perfectly stand alone as a one-shot but I look forrward to its continuation ≧▽≦y

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keyhun April 7 2016, 03:54:31 UTC
thank you! :)

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hyunnyb April 5 2016, 05:44:16 UTC
What a lovely flow this story had. The progression from acquaintances to a committed couple was so endearing. I loved that they didn't have lots of baggage or hang-ups, just two young people discovering life and growing together. The writing was beautifully done the pacing was excellent and the story was just a joy to read:) Thanks for sharing it<3

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keyhun April 7 2016, 03:54:42 UTC
aww thank you so much <3. in following parts, it's possible that more of their "baggage" might be revealed.

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sheilapiglet April 5 2016, 06:08:42 UTC
This could've been a one-shot but glad that you've decided to extend it...wonder what YunJae will face along the way in their relationship? Seems to be going quite smoothly so far....I'm assuming that one big hurdle will be Jae's family and gaining their acceptance...looking forward to YunJae overcoming hardships together and coming out stronger than ever ^^

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keyhun April 7 2016, 03:55:39 UTC
thank you! :)

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kattan69 April 5 2016, 09:19:40 UTC
I'm so loving it....they are so sweet and romantic together...^_^

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keyhun April 7 2016, 03:55:59 UTC
hehehe thank you~ yunjae are so good at that

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marieluna April 5 2016, 12:25:42 UTC
Sweet, funny and entirely too hot, had to start fanning myself at the lemon and my housemate looked at me weirdly lol
Hoping for more soon!

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keyhun April 7 2016, 03:56:11 UTC
HAHAH thanks~

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