wow...that was...oof. I really liked the [pauses] they were really great for making the narration come to life. At first I was worried for Kiseop, then, at the end, of course everything ended up going the complete opposite way. I almost feel like this could warrant a really angsty sequel....hohohoho, glutton for punishment? methinks yes.
i was worried the format might not work out well, i'm glad you thought it's good~ well i decided to stop torturing kiseop in everything i write haha u__u /shot (i was considering writing a second part but well stuff happens and it ended up as an uncompleted ms word doc OTL) thank you for commenting! ;;
oh my goodness, this is so... oh god how should I say this? it touched my heart, deeply. I thought everything would turn bad to Kiseop but god, I trembled when I read this beautiful writing towards the end. You've done a great job! :D
wait what the please don't tell me kiseop or jaeseop died i thought kiseop died at first then i reread it and realised it was probably jaeseop who died no pls just no they survived right? right? RIGHT? /cries
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That is so lyrically beautiful and horribly sad and I can't BELIEVE you made my (and Kiseop's) Jaeseop... *can't say it*
Just....
*pulls blanket over head*
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but thank you for commenting ;;
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well i decided to stop torturing kiseop in everything i write haha u__u /shot
(i was considering writing a second part but well stuff happens and it ended up as an uncompleted ms word doc OTL)
thank you for commenting! ;;
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thank you for commenting~
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please don't tell me kiseop or jaeseop died
i thought kiseop died at first
then i reread it and realised it was probably jaeseop who died
no pls just no
they survived right?
right?
RIGHT?
/cries
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