SPN FIC: The Many Deaths of the Winchester Brothers

Oct 30, 2011 15:04

Title: The Many Deaths of the Winchester Brothers
Characters: Dean, Lisa, Sam (mentioned)
Word count: 3,500
Summary: Coda to 5.22. Dean is having a rough time adjusting to civilian life. I know, I'm late to the party. 
Warnings: Angst. Dean!POV, drunk!Dean!POV
Disclaimer: Not my sandbox. 
Notes: So, I work in Battle Creek, MI and this seriously jumped ( Read more... )

sammich, pie, fic, deen, supernatural, i majored in english can you tell?, writing, geekiness, pimping

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hidden_easel October 30 2011, 19:52:40 UTC
Great read~! Thanks for being awesome ;)

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kettle_o_fish November 5 2011, 21:50:01 UTC
Thanks for reading! <3

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roque_clasique October 31 2011, 00:01:00 UTC
Oooh, I adore this. I'm always starving for Braeden-era fic and this is just stunning and sad and illuminating. Your Lisa is awesome, and your drunk!Dean voice is just perfect. Wonderful, wonderful.

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kettle_o_fish November 5 2011, 21:50:49 UTC
Aww. Thank you. Lisa just...showed up on her own and decided to be awesome. >< She's awesome like that.

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wishflthinkr October 31 2011, 00:06:17 UTC
Great, per usual! ;) I especially liked the stuff with the real ID's. Those boys did deserve better.

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kettle_o_fish November 5 2011, 21:52:10 UTC
They did. They really really did. It's heartbreaking when you think about everything they lost. Most of the time, they didn't even realize it was gone until later. Aww.

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rince1wind October 31 2011, 00:47:53 UTC
Made me cry.

Some very nice writing.

"Bright-eyed and blond, swimming in thrift store leather: that Dean’s been gone a long time too."

But it ends with some hope. I really want Dean to have loved some of his time with Lisa, who loved him. (And I hate that he asked Cas to erase her memory of him. In my head that didn't happen.)

Thanks!

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kettle_o_fish November 5 2011, 21:53:57 UTC
But it ends with some hope.

This. I try really hard not to write completely hopeless things.

I hate that Dean had Cas erase their memories too. I hated it so much.

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quickreaver October 31 2011, 01:46:00 UTC
Oh, this is lovely melancholy sadness! I have such fondness for your Lisa; she's strong and soft and tough and forgiving. And your Dean is heart-breakingly spot on. When Lisa finds Sam's old college i.d., I got kinda sniffly, I confess. Wonderful, wonderful slice of life. You do those SO well. *adores*

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kettle_o_fish November 5 2011, 21:54:32 UTC
When Lisa finds Sam's old college i.d., I got kinda sniffly,

Not gonna lie, I got kinda sniffly writing it.

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