Comments | kessie: PoT Drabble: A State of Ill Repair [Tezuka/Ryoma]

kessie

PoT Drabble: A State of Ill Repair [Tezuka/Ryoma]

Mar 09, 2006 11:47

The only excuse I have is that I've had The Tea Party's Mantra on repeat in my iPod all morning, and this is what popped into my head. In fact, I'll upload the song for you all on YSI later on because I love it that much. [Edit: Uploaded here.]

( A State of Ill Repair )

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Comments 14

aziraphale_mel March 9 2006, 15:08:06 UTC

:D:D is nice. mmmm imagery. i like the rain bits.

safe and dry and haunted.

guh, haunted.

His arm is suddenly caught in a tight grip and he is yanked to a stop, whirled around, and pressed against a body equally as soaked as his own.

*imagines scene. dies*

kessie March 15 2006, 17:57:03 UTC

Thank you! I really like that image too. XD

bookshop March 9 2006, 17:07:04 UTC

His arm is suddenly caught in a tight grip and he is yanked to a stop, whirled around, and pressed against a body equally as soaked as his own.

“No -” he begins,

I'm fascinated by what was going through his mind at that moment, and what he would have said after "No," before he was so deliciously interrupted.

Tezuka slams his mouth against his

Mmmmmmm. oh, yes. This fandom needs--okay, I need--more forceful Tezuka. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

kessie March 15 2006, 17:57:34 UTC

Forceful Tezuka is good! I guess, get him annoyed enough and even he has to get his ass in gear. ^__^

weirdlyyours March 10 2006, 00:25:55 UTC

Yesss. I think my favorite part was when Tezuka slams his mouth against his. Just the idea of Tezuka going after Ryoma makes me tingle. ♥

kessie March 15 2006, 17:58:03 UTC

It makes me tingle too! and cheer him on and make him go faster!

shushesyou March 10 2006, 01:02:34 UTC

I also loved forceful Tezuka *_*

and I don't even feel guilty for reading this because I've finished rough drafts and even the intro of my chemistry lab

kessie March 15 2006, 17:58:25 UTC

Forceful Tezuka is goooood... mmmm.

seii_ryu March 25 2006, 02:55:38 UTC

Can't believe I missed this.

Imagery wins a big gold star, though Tezuka's glowing may outshine that one... Will you write a backstory? *puppy eyes*

kessie March 27 2006, 21:04:45 UTC

Heh. That's okay. :) I think I need to do a end-of-month round-up of stuff I've written (I've seen other people do it), which might be helpful in case anyone missed anything.

Clearly, in light of the new OVA, nothing outshines Tezuka while he's glowing and sprouting wings. It is ridiculous how attached I am to it. Haha.