Brigit's Flame, September, week #4

[keppiehed]

Title: The Apple of My Eye
Author: keppiehed
Warnings: none
Rating: G
Word Count: 2887
Prompt: “Insurance”
A/N: Written for week #4 at brigits_flame. This concludes my monthlong side challenge with the fantastic and talented 1onewon and firesign10, in which we start our stories with each other's last lines, although it was such great fun I'd love to continue it! Also, I have to give

Comments

[bardiphouka]

Your daughter, it appears, has a dark streak to her. Or perhaps it was just your skill at writing that made it so. Love the last line. It is such a oral piece, I can just picture the storyteller ending it like that.

[firesign10]

That was marvelous!!! Wow, beautifully done!! *applauds*

[bluegerl]

Oh dear me. I could see it coming and could do nothing to stop it!!!!! oh dear me, oh deary me. Oh wicked witch, wicked wicked witch... Oh what fools love makes of us!

Splendid again. And I ought to go and suss out the other stories written with each other's beginning/endig lines... could we have the links please? It'd be fun to see how different the stories become!

[hbart]

Ugh! I hate this kind of story because I find myself screaming at the main character to quit being a dumbass and leave before it is too late. But, they never seem to hear me and they make the bad decision each time.

Eerie, creepy story. For some weird reason, I think of all things, the bones in her hair creeped me out the most. Your daughter is becoming a dark little thing in your foot steps. You must be a proud mama, LOL.

Nice change of pace from previous weeks, even if I was hoping for more sea monkeys. :) You are so versatile!

Of course, a story is never enough for me. Now, I want to know what happens when Marisa and Chadim never show back up to town. Do their friends come looking for them, or just assume they ran away for a private happily ever after. Okay, that line of thought is just creeping me out more. *runs off to pet a bunny or kiss a baby or something fluffy and happy*

[thefaeway]

Hello :P