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Musemuggers

Jul 08, 2013 11:24

Title: The Sixth Kind
Author: keppiehed
Word Count: 905
Prompt: (carefully places microphone on ground) (hobbles stage-left on cane) (cackles, turns into a million crows), sentient, static
A/N: Written for musemuggers, Challenge #505, options, #1 and #4.

( The Sixth Kind )

prompt: sentient static crows, musemuggers

Comments 8

sadme4b July 8 2013, 18:05:03 UTC

Oh, I do like the avian twist to this!

keppiehed July 8 2013, 18:10:54 UTC

I painted myself into a corner and I had to work the prompt in somehow, hehe! Also, I had NO idea when I wrote this, but today is the 66th anniversary of the Roswell landing. Yay coincidence!

rubyelf July 8 2013, 21:06:16 UTC

What a strange story... I mean that in a good way!

keppiehed July 8 2013, 21:07:56 UTC

Thank you much. I'm so pleased that you read it! *beams*

hbart July 9 2013, 03:58:09 UTC

If I can say nothing else about you, it's that you always keep me guessing. When I start a story, I don't know if I am going to laugh my ass off, bawl my eyes out, or be creeped out. To name only a few, of course. Even what I think it is going to be at the first word, is not always how it turns out. I love that. This one was off the wall, and left me not knowing whether to cheer for the bird mans escape, or be concerned for nearby citizens. The jury is still out. :)

keppiehed July 9 2013, 10:27:43 UTC

Aw, that's nice of you! I don't set out to be unpredictable, but I was just worried that I was getting stale and that I write the same old thing every time. So I'm glad that this one held your interest and you don't even know what to think when it is all done. Yay! :D

meganeko_mausuu July 10 2013, 06:59:49 UTC

Oh no... did they really dissect his family? How cruel...

keppiehed July 10 2013, 10:32:29 UTC

It is cruel! I had this image of Mr. Smith from the Matrix in my head while I was writing this, hehe!