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Musemuggers

May 01, 2013 13:55

Title: The Little Things
Author: keppiehed
Word Count: 1529
Prompt: “growing”
A/N: Written for musemuggers, Challenge #495, Option #1.

( The Little Things )

prompt: growing, musemuggers

Comments 4

sadme4b May 2 2013, 14:49:39 UTC

Sort of sad, but sort of not - interesting read - I felt like I just fell into the story . . .

keppiehed May 2 2013, 14:52:14 UTC

This one would not iron out; it was so frustrating! Gah! Some stories just give more trouble than others, you know? You are so sweet to have taken the time to read it; thank you so much!

hbart May 4 2013, 16:19:32 UTC

I was pretty sure with the opening line that this was going to be my biography since I have lost my mind several times in the grocery store, lol.

I like this one. You think perhaps her dad is in her mind, but then it seems as real to us as it does to her, and you wonder if there is a way he could really be there. The end is the best, because this could have ended sad, but instead it is hopeful. Just what she needed, even if she didn't know it.

keppiehed May 7 2013, 19:39:24 UTC

This one about killed me. I re-wrote the ending about 4 times, and it still was terrible. This week I have nothing, I can't focus at all to do anything. I am all bogged down in PT, which is a WHOLE different kettle of fish from OT. Why didn't you tell me how out of shape I am? *cries and cries and cries...*