Wingbones
A while ago (or, four posts ago because I'm shit at updating) I posted the prologue of the steam-punk novel I'm trying to write, Wingbones.
As of today, I've finished chapter 5 and am now looking for some feedback before I go on. Basically, I want to know if you read this much of it, would you pay to read the rest? Though I think if anyone was kind enough to read this much of it and if it ever actually got published, you may be owed one free copy. But still, woudl you pay for it if you had to?
If anyone is willing to read it for me, just comment and I'll email it to you. I'm sure I have everyone's email address anyhow. Am looking for any amount of feedback from a simple "That's great/good/bad/shit" to detailed, line-by-line nitpicking.
It's about 60pages (1.5line spacing, 12pt Times New Roman) or 20,084 words.
Thanks to anyone willing. :)
As of today, I've finished chapter 5 and am now looking for some feedback before I go on. Basically, I want to know if you read this much of it, would you pay to read the rest? Though I think if anyone was kind enough to read this much of it and if it ever actually got published, you may be owed one free copy. But still, woudl you pay for it if you had to?
If anyone is willing to read it for me, just comment and I'll email it to you. I'm sure I have everyone's email address anyhow. Am looking for any amount of feedback from a simple "That's great/good/bad/shit" to detailed, line-by-line nitpicking.
It's about 60pages (1.5line spacing, 12pt Times New Roman) or 20,084 words.
Thanks to anyone willing. :)