New Story Idea
Hey everyone, sorry for not posting til now, I've been incredibly busy lately, and right now I just woke up from the weirdest dream, and I feel like turning it into a story. I don't remember all of it, but I do remember quite a bit. It's going to be scattered because its all different thought processes trying to coexist with each other.
Okay.
The title is unknown, but it may be called The Cyclops.
There is a family that lives out on a ranch in the middle of nowhere. Occasionally they have visitors with they welcome with open arms, and are very nice and very sincere when it comes to anything. They are honest and kind folk. However, there is a guest that lives with them that is not so nice, not so kind, but is also not seen. When someone least expects it, this guest will attack the unknowing person. Luckily the family knows what to do to defend themselves.
The guest is not normal human height, not even little person height, but more along the lines of a little speck. This speck has incredible strength and can possess any weapon or weapons and use them to its advantage. Its a very agile little creature, hopping from one weapon to the next. Most would consider the creature a demon for all the things it does to people. It is a mini-cyclops. It kills just for the love of blood.
The story is kind of like a traditional horror movie, a bunch of girls and a few guys are on a trip when their car breaks down (I haven't decided on that, but leave it be for now), and what do you know, its at the family's ranch. They ask if they can have help, the family agrees but tells them not to go into the house just yet, as they are unprepared for any guests. So as they wait outside, dirt starts flying into the sky, as if it is repeatedly being kicked. From the ground a large rotating table saw starts flying towards the girls. They all dodge it but escape only with a few scrapes. The saw keeps coming at them, but a family member jumps out of the house with an axe and swings at the saw, both blades pushing against each other until the saw gives up and drops to the ground. The family member asks if the girls are okay. After they respond he tells them to stay put as there may be more attacks, he wants them to stay safe.
The family reaches to pick up the saw, but it speeds away on the ground. As he finally catches up to it, he jumps in a matter of seconds. The saw has now combined with other large and small saws to create some sort of machine. Two large saws, one on top, one on bottom, for small saws as the corners, and a saw that is flying around like its in orbit around the machine. The family member runs back inside. The girls are completely scared and don't know what to do. The machine slowly starts gliding to them, each inch has the orbiting saw getting closer. As soon as the machine was close enough, it lowered the orbiting saw to swing around near the ground to get the girls legs. It catches onto on of them and makes a gash, causing her to scream and bleed, the others instantly run and drag her to keep her from dying. The orbiting saw drops to the ground. Once the girls are near their car again, one of the corner saws shoots out towards them. They all dodge, but it nearly hits the girl with the gash in the leg.
Before it could fire another shot, the same family member comes dashing out of the house with a hammer in one hand and a nail spike in the other. He ran up to the saw and held the nail spike above it, directly in the center. The machine realized it was in trouble and turned around to "face" the intruder, but it was a little too slow, the family member slammed the spike into the saw's hole, then drove it in the center even further by hitting the spike with the hammer. The machine gave a loud wail that lasted for seconds, then the machine dropped.
All the girls were freaked out, breathing heavily, one bleeding heavily, all scared out of their minds. The family member turned to them and again asked if they were okay.
"What the fuck was that?" one of the girls asked. The family member stared at her for a short moment, then he replied.
"That was a cyclops. A mini-cyclops that has been terrorizing us for many years. It tries to kill, but if it can't, it will come back with a different and more deadly weapon than before."
"You mean you didn't kill it by stabbing the hole?"
"I stabbed the eye, it blends in with whatever it creates, its the only weak point, but, it didn't die. I don't know if it can. It will come back, so we have to be ready. I'm sorry."
And that's all I remember from my dream. What do you think? Story-worthy?
Okay.
The title is unknown, but it may be called The Cyclops.
There is a family that lives out on a ranch in the middle of nowhere. Occasionally they have visitors with they welcome with open arms, and are very nice and very sincere when it comes to anything. They are honest and kind folk. However, there is a guest that lives with them that is not so nice, not so kind, but is also not seen. When someone least expects it, this guest will attack the unknowing person. Luckily the family knows what to do to defend themselves.
The guest is not normal human height, not even little person height, but more along the lines of a little speck. This speck has incredible strength and can possess any weapon or weapons and use them to its advantage. Its a very agile little creature, hopping from one weapon to the next. Most would consider the creature a demon for all the things it does to people. It is a mini-cyclops. It kills just for the love of blood.
The story is kind of like a traditional horror movie, a bunch of girls and a few guys are on a trip when their car breaks down (I haven't decided on that, but leave it be for now), and what do you know, its at the family's ranch. They ask if they can have help, the family agrees but tells them not to go into the house just yet, as they are unprepared for any guests. So as they wait outside, dirt starts flying into the sky, as if it is repeatedly being kicked. From the ground a large rotating table saw starts flying towards the girls. They all dodge it but escape only with a few scrapes. The saw keeps coming at them, but a family member jumps out of the house with an axe and swings at the saw, both blades pushing against each other until the saw gives up and drops to the ground. The family member asks if the girls are okay. After they respond he tells them to stay put as there may be more attacks, he wants them to stay safe.
The family reaches to pick up the saw, but it speeds away on the ground. As he finally catches up to it, he jumps in a matter of seconds. The saw has now combined with other large and small saws to create some sort of machine. Two large saws, one on top, one on bottom, for small saws as the corners, and a saw that is flying around like its in orbit around the machine. The family member runs back inside. The girls are completely scared and don't know what to do. The machine slowly starts gliding to them, each inch has the orbiting saw getting closer. As soon as the machine was close enough, it lowered the orbiting saw to swing around near the ground to get the girls legs. It catches onto on of them and makes a gash, causing her to scream and bleed, the others instantly run and drag her to keep her from dying. The orbiting saw drops to the ground. Once the girls are near their car again, one of the corner saws shoots out towards them. They all dodge, but it nearly hits the girl with the gash in the leg.
Before it could fire another shot, the same family member comes dashing out of the house with a hammer in one hand and a nail spike in the other. He ran up to the saw and held the nail spike above it, directly in the center. The machine realized it was in trouble and turned around to "face" the intruder, but it was a little too slow, the family member slammed the spike into the saw's hole, then drove it in the center even further by hitting the spike with the hammer. The machine gave a loud wail that lasted for seconds, then the machine dropped.
All the girls were freaked out, breathing heavily, one bleeding heavily, all scared out of their minds. The family member turned to them and again asked if they were okay.
"What the fuck was that?" one of the girls asked. The family member stared at her for a short moment, then he replied.
"That was a cyclops. A mini-cyclops that has been terrorizing us for many years. It tries to kill, but if it can't, it will come back with a different and more deadly weapon than before."
"You mean you didn't kill it by stabbing the hole?"
"I stabbed the eye, it blends in with whatever it creates, its the only weak point, but, it didn't die. I don't know if it can. It will come back, so we have to be ready. I'm sorry."
And that's all I remember from my dream. What do you think? Story-worthy?