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nerdfightergirl July 9 2013, 02:17:02 UTC
When I started the chapter, I was convinced that Arizona would leave in the middle of the meeting, but she impressed me.

I think it's an interesting mentality that people perpetuate that if you're not suffering as much as someone else, your problems aren't valid. If someone else has lost an arm and a leg and you've only lost a leg, you've still lost and your loss is still valid.

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kennedysbitch July 21 2013, 20:43:26 UTC
Seems like a lot of people thought she would leave. Give the girl a little credit. ;)

Agreed about the loss. It's a hard mentality to break out of, I think. Arizona's going to have a rough time with it.

Thanks as always! :)

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ingreenmts July 9 2013, 03:33:34 UTC
I love this story. I appreciate how you addressed the PTSD. Thanks.

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kennedysbitch July 21 2013, 20:43:53 UTC
Thanks so much! :) I'm really trying to do the whole PTSD process justice.

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leonhart_17 July 9 2013, 04:45:01 UTC
Aww, Arizona is really trying and I love it! And Callie's giving her what she needs and it's wonderful! :D :D :D

The notification for this made my night! Thank you!

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kennedysbitch July 21 2013, 20:46:41 UTC
Aw, thanks! Love the enthusiasm. :D They're both trying, as hard as it is. Callie's a trooper, especially through the really hard stuff. Glad you enjoyed it!

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strandedinaber July 9 2013, 05:58:24 UTC
So I think this might be my favourite chapter ever. Is it weird to be proud of a fictional character? Cause I kinda am.

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kennedysbitch July 21 2013, 20:47:37 UTC
Not weird at all! It was a really big deal for Arizona to go through with it and not bail at the last second.

Really glad you enjoyed it! Thanks again. :D

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neolithicdream July 9 2013, 09:17:31 UTC
This was a lovely present to wake up to today, great chapter too.

I love the way you never seem obliged to rush your stories to a happy ending and yet manage not to fall into the trap of being repetitive or overly angsty. I like the realistic feeling of an 'onwards and upwards' but slow moving curve while always leaving open the possibility of nasty speed bumps along the way.

Which is my way of saying, ' thanks, now more please'!

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kennedysbitch July 21 2013, 20:49:30 UTC
It's definitely a slow burn, for sure. If I had more time, the chapters would be posted in much quicker order, so it probably wouldn't seem QUITE as slow as it does. But, I'm determined to do the story justice, so I'm glad you feel it's working so far. :) Thank you!

Almost finished with the next chapter. Hopefully will be up sometime late this week/next weekend, if all goes well.

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