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nerdfightergirl July 29 2012, 23:25:58 UTC
Arizona, you are so adorable. I've had days like that, where it seems that every time I try to clean up the mess, I just make an even bigger mess. But at least she got some good cookies out of the deal.

I'm glad they aren't fighting anymore. I don't like fighting.

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kennedysbitch August 27 2012, 16:29:58 UTC
Baking with crutches would be hard. Plus somethings tells me Arizona's a bit of a klutz to begin with. ;)

Thanks! :)

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maggiemerc July 30 2012, 00:05:45 UTC
I shouldn't have been as laughing as much as I was but that disaster kitchen reveal was a delight.

Loved the way you incorporated canon Arizona lines into her conversation with Callie there at the end.

And was it wrong that I squealed in delight when I saw an update? Because I did.

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kennedysbitch August 27 2012, 16:31:45 UTC
Thanks! The idea of Arizona attempting to bake while creating a disaster zone was too funny to pass up.

Nothing wrong with squealing, hehe. I appreciate the enthusiasm. :) Thanks for reading!

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funkyshaz57 July 30 2012, 02:02:24 UTC
Arizona is just too adorable for words!! I'm happy it turned out this way, I was prepared for some yelling and angry tears and maybe hurtful words from both of them. They still need to talk but this seemed to maybe set the path for a more amicable talk hopefully.

Callie's vulnerability broke my heart. I can't imagine the frustration she must feel at times. Wanting to be with Arizona, wanting to support her, help her but Arizona not letting her in. Watching someone you care about hurt while you stand there and feel helpless but at the same time from Arizona's side she has so much to contend with, her injuries, her emotional state, finding herself again, being in a relationship. They are in a very sticky mess but this kind of felt like a turning point..Maybe I'm wrong, although they didn't discuss what they probably should have it felt like a step in the right direction

Thanks for posting! And I'm super looking forward to more.

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kennedysbitch August 27 2012, 16:33:30 UTC
They definitely needed to break the ice, and I think Arizona's man-made disaster accomplished that nicely. ;)

It's definitely the beginning of a turning point, but you'll see in coming chapters that it'll take a little more for things to really shift for them. (*insert ominous music here*)

Thanks for commenting! :) I'll get a new chapter up after my move is fully over.

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nothisisserious July 30 2012, 02:32:50 UTC
love love loved it! The cookie scene was darling :)

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kennedysbitch August 27 2012, 16:34:48 UTC
Thanks! Arizona in the kitchen just has so much potential for hilarity, haha. I blame the fandom for starting the "Arizona is a bad cook" thing.

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leonhart_17 July 30 2012, 02:33:36 UTC
Aww, they're so freaking adorable! I love that Callie didn't even now what to say about the kitchen disaster so she just kissed her :D Cue me, squeeing!

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kennedysbitch August 27 2012, 16:55:23 UTC
Hee! Thanks. :D The idea of Arizona's attempt at baking turning into a snowballing disaster was way too good to pass up. (I picture her as a bit of a natural klutz, even without the crutches...)

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