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nncyl72 September 20 2011, 13:02:42 UTC
Oh WOW!
That was amazing!!
What a lovely thing to wake up to this morning!!!
;-)

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kennedysbitch October 2 2011, 05:38:57 UTC
Thank you! You were a very fast reader, impressive. ;) Glad you enjoyed it.

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xena_and_gabby September 20 2011, 16:37:29 UTC
Haven't read any of this yet (but super-excited to do so) but was curious as you listed it as Part One. Is Part Two complete as well? Or do you just have a plan set up? Thanks! Will be reading this one this weekend! Looking forward to it!

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kennedysbitch October 2 2011, 05:39:49 UTC
Part Two is complete, yes. (Well, almost. 2-3 chapters remaining to be written, but it's mostly done.) It'll be posted in the coming weeks but as single chapters, not all at once.

Thanks for taking the time to read! We really appreciate it. :)

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nerdfightergirl September 20 2011, 20:42:06 UTC
I was hoping their first kiss would be magical, and you did not disappoint.

I really, really liked this. So, how long do we have to wait for Part 2?

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kennedysbitch October 2 2011, 05:40:38 UTC
Thank you for taking the time to comment on every chapter, that was awesome. We're so happy you liked it.

Part 2 hopefully won't take more than a few weeks to get polished; we don't keep you guys waiting too long if we can help it. Thanks again!

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nerdfightergirl October 2 2011, 05:42:30 UTC
I comment and review a lot more now since starting to write myself, because now I understand the desire for feedback, particularly meaningful feedback.

Yay! And thank you for writing such an amazing tale.

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walking_weapon September 21 2011, 08:00:44 UTC
That was epic. I just sat here and read the entire thing parts 1 to 12 and I'm SO going to regret that in the morning when I have to get up for school, but I don't even care. I love everything about this fic. The characterization, the intensity, how it built...it all worked amazingly well. And by the "end part one" bit I'm guessing there's more planned? If so YAY!

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kennedysbitch October 2 2011, 05:41:29 UTC
You were very speedy indeed, haha. Thank you! Hopefully school wasn't too painful to sit through the next day, ack.

Part 2 is definitely nearly finished, so we'll post it in the near future. Stay tuned! And thanks again for reading. :)

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walking_weapon October 2 2011, 05:51:26 UTC
It was kinda brutal, but I survived :P

Yay! Glad to hear it, can't wait :D

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funkyshaz57 September 21 2011, 10:15:22 UTC
OK so I've read all 12 parts in one sitting and commented on every part! This was amazing! More than amazing just...I can't even think of a word to describe how I feel about this. At first I wasn't sure how much I would like it, it was quite a slow paced 'Calzona Story' but I guess it had to be done this way, I enjoyed from start to end, I loved reading about their relationship starting from the very start. Arizona's struggles and fears, her life before hand and her feelings. It was happy and sad and funny and overwhelming at times ( ... )

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kennedysbitch October 2 2011, 05:43:59 UTC
We tried really, really hard to perfect the first kiss (I re-wrote it about 4 times), so I'm relieved to hear it ended up well! Thanks so much for taking the time to comment on everything.

Arizona is technically no longer Callie's patient, and she's not in the hospital anymore, so in theory Callie wouldn't get in trouble for seeing her. Though I don't think she'll be broadcasting it to the Chief any time soon, heheh.

I hope you enjoy part 2 just as much! It'll start getting posted in the near-ish future. And yes, FL will get finished, eventually. I'll have to juggle them both now. Thanks!

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