Fault Lines (5 [Part One]/36)

[kennedysbitch]

Fault Lines

Chapter 5 (Part One)/36
Authors: Faith kennedysbitch & Kye
Pairing: Callie/Arizona, Mark/Lexie
Rating: NC-17

Story Summary: Sequel to Choices. Callie and Arizona make the decision to move forward with their lives, but when a gradual series of events begin to snowball, Arizona tries desperately not to lose her grip on reality.

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Comments

[almicah]

OMG this is soo wrong in a million different ways. Is Callie THAT stupid? She's a doctor! She can't be that stupid. Alex Karev would be a better donor than baby hungry Mark!!

[kennedysbitch]

Not too sure I'd want an Alex-baby floating around out there, but I know what you mean. I don't think she can play the 'oblivious' card for much longer here.

[roughian]

Yesyesyesyesyesyes! Updaateeess. Whew. Okay. Focusing.

Callie's so impossibly adorable that I can't handle it. Her little list of secret baby names made me go "D'awww" right in my desk chair.
Of course Jessica's a good name. ;) Olivia's cute too. (And Riley is my dog's name, but I would say she's a tough girl. Hehe).

I like that Arizona is giving a conscious effort here. She's really trying to be as supportive as possible. I'm with Callie, I am happy that she changed her mind.

Sloan is ridiculous, but so necessary. And I'd like to see Arizona deliver another KO punch to him asap. That was great in Choices. His comments made me wanna slap him. Especially with the stir ups. I have a feeling his voyeur session with the two of them has given him a new lease on life. Or just more reasons to be self aggrandizing. But he certainly doesn't need more of those.

Nice touch with even Callie getting a little freaked by the promptness of mother nature. I can't wait for more, as always.

I think I'm gonna be a groupie for the two of you.

[kennedysbitch]

I love your enthusiasm! Hehe. Thanks. :D

Kye wrote in Callie's secret little list of baby names. It made me swoon a little, I'll admit. Though it doesn't take much for Callie to make me swoon.

I won't say what name the kid ends up getting, but I think it's suitable. And very cute. And may or may not be mentioned here, we'll just have to wait and find out. ;)

Arizona is trying so very, very hard for Callie's sake, but...I don't think she can handle much more of Mark. She wants a baby, but not Mark's baby, I think that much is pretty clear. Should make for an 'interesting' conversation with Callie.

Mark...I love him, and I hate him. I can't decide. I thoroughly enjoyed Arizona punching him in Choices, though. He might mean well most times, but that doesn't mean he doesn't deserve a smack in the face every once in a while. Especially when he's being a douchey perv.

Yay! I like groupies....er. That sounded creepy. But you know what I mean, heh.

[majincammy]

Callie is infuriating, bringing Mark along for all these appointments! How is Arizona supposed to feel like the other parent when Mark is there to add in his two cents! Poor Arizona! I'm loving this story! The surgery was awesome and I can't wait for Arizona to use some Marine punchin' on Mark!

[kennedysbitch]

Don't think Callie can remain oblivious for too much longer, especially if Arizona finally loses her extreme cool she's been managing to keep thus far. And I have to admit, I find angry!Arizona super sexy. ;)

[lillim3]

Good Lord, someone needs to slap some sense into Callie. And Mark just needs to be slapped, period. His overstepping of boundaries is ridiculous and infuriating. The only good thing to come out of this is if his behavior becomes so over the top that even Callie sees it, and they'll have to completely squash the 'Mark as a donor' idea. I wonder how much more Arizona can take before she blows. After this chapter, I'm guessing not much. She needs to kick Mark's ass.

Apart from that whole mess, the C/A intimacy and baby names? Totally adorable. :)

[kennedysbitch]

Arizona is definitely at her breaking point here, for sure. She'll be talking to Callie very, very shortly. And I don't think Callie can ignore as angry Arizona for long, heh.

Callie's girly side with the baby thing is super cute. I love seeing her all vulnerable around Arizona.

I'm happy we could infuse some cuteness into the bleak Calzona-verse. :D Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

[ciprus]

If they don't watch it, Mark Sloan is going to snatch that baby as soon as it's born. His clock must be ticking into overdrive. Arizona needs to tell Callie this is a BAD idea and Callie needs to get a clue. This fic is frustrating but entertaining. Kinda like Grey's itself. :) More, more! :D

[kennedysbitch]

Ha! You made me snort into my juice reading that Mark's "clock is ticking". That's too funny. Also totally true.

Hopefully not frustrating beyond the point of no return. ;) Things will get sorted out very, very soon, I promise.