“Nobody can ride your back if your back's not bent”

Apr 06, 2014 09:56

This was my punishment, young hero, for being on the wrong side of the war that sent one brother to Tartarus and left me estranged from the others ( Read more... )

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similiesslip April 6 2014, 14:24:03 UTC
Wow, what a great connection to this prompt! I love the idea that he shares in the joy of mankind's discoveries...

And I love the line: "Give me the means to never be weak again." I wish for the same.

I really enjoyed reading your entry! :)

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kenakeri April 6 2014, 18:29:21 UTC
Glad you liked it :)

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elledanger April 6 2014, 16:21:08 UTC
Oh gosh, that was really sad. Really enjoyable, but I didn't expect that turn at the end and what a gut-punch it was.

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kenakeri April 6 2014, 18:28:02 UTC
Thank you. Greek myths seldom had happy endings.

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ohelectricshock April 6 2014, 16:21:33 UTC
YES YES YES YES. That is how I felt reading this, hahahaha. I am a huge Classics nerd, I loved this so much.

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kenakeri April 6 2014, 18:18:36 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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i_will_not_say April 6 2014, 17:45:53 UTC
I liked your take on the topic; it was very creative and cool.

Your story's ending had quite the impact!

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kenakeri April 6 2014, 18:16:35 UTC
Thank you. My husbands playing Age of Mythology these days, so I've had Greek myths on my mind :)

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eska818 April 6 2014, 18:11:22 UTC
I really enjoyed this, despite the ridiculously sad ending! ._. Poor Atlas. Awesome take on the prompt.

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kenakeri April 9 2014, 07:00:55 UTC
Thanks for reading :)

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