You updated yay!!! Jesus you just love putting me through the emotinal grinder with this story. I love the discussion about the house, because it truly need to be said. I mean how can Jared go back there when all things are said and done. Also, the confrontation between Jensen and Jared over the idea of a shrink was so life-like. He really does need to talk to someone and then to find out they had a miscarriage before was horrible. And the way you ended with him blacking out infront of the house was so mean. How dare you leave it like that, but I guess it keeps the readers hooked. But, I wonder for the reason for Jared being there was because of Ty and him wanting to be strong for him.
Hehe, yup I did... finally, lol. Aw, I'm sorry but I'll take it as a compliment that the story is effecting you that much! I'm so happy you liked the way they discussed the house, I think I rewrote that part like 4 times so phew! And the shrink too, I really want to try and make them react realistically and such so I'm very happy to hear that it was "life-like" :D And you're right, Jay does need to talk to somebody... hopefully Jensen will be able to convince him of that. Aw, yes... the miscarriage, I originally had no plans for that and then it all of a sudden wrote itself in there but yeah, that is a pretty traumatic thing to go through, I think. Aw! I'm sorry about the cliffhanger :( but the good news is that I already have the first part of the next chapter written so hopefully ch. 9 will be posted soon.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really enjoyed your comments :D
Aw, I'm sorry :( but the good news is that I have first part of the next chapter written so hopefully I'll update sooner this time. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying my story :D
I love you...and i'm sure you know what i'm talking about.
And i agree with vinylreckoning, the discussion about the house had to be done...and i think they sould buy a new one...it's too painful for Jared to come back in their old house.
I loved the update, and i can't wait for the next one....i hope your computer "willl get better soon" :P
I never get tired of this story, it's original, well written and not disturbing despite the rape part...and i love it.
Lol, I figured you would! Originally, I wasn't going to have *this* happen until much later in the story but then it just kind of wrote itself so I'm going with it. And as for the house, Jensen agrees with you so they'll be getting a moving truck soon.
Thanks! I hope so too. My bf is pretty good with computers so hopefully he'll be able to fix it (without the big price tag :P) Good news is that I have the beginning of the next chapter written so hopefully it'll be up before too long.
AW! Wow! Thank you so much! I'm so happy you think so and I hope that you will continue to think so highly of the story. Really, I'm flattered. :)
Thank you! I'm thrilled that you're loving it and the emotions in it :D Yeah, me too... hopefully he'll get it back to me sometime next week. Though I've already started on the next chapter so hopefully that's a good sign that it will be posted sooner. :)
Poor Jared. I can see he wants to face his fears and try to get over this but it's really taking alot out of him. Jensen is trying so hard to get Jared past this but I don't think he knows the extent of what Jared is thinking and Tyler just wants to know why everything has changed. Oh poor boys *takes out tissue*
Aw, yeah, Jay's pretty heart breaking right about now. And Jensen isn't completely aware of just how much trouble, emotionally and mentally, Jared is in right now but he'll find out soon and it's not going to be pretty. As for Tyler... I think this whole thing is going to make him grow up a bit even if Jensen and Jared never tell him the details.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'll try to update ASAP and I look forward to hearing what you think about the rest of the story. :)
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You updated yay!!! Jesus you just love putting me through the emotinal grinder with this story. I love the discussion about the house, because it truly need to be said. I mean how can Jared go back there when all things are said and done. Also, the confrontation between Jensen and Jared over the idea of a shrink was so life-like. He really does need to talk to someone and then to find out they had a miscarriage before was horrible. And the way you ended with him blacking out infront of the house was so mean. How dare you leave it like that, but I guess it keeps the readers hooked. But, I wonder for the reason for Jared being there was because of Ty and him wanting to be strong for him.
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Thanks for reading and reviewing! I really enjoyed your comments :D
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Sick? Dizzy?
I love you...and i'm sure you know what i'm talking about.
And i agree with vinylreckoning, the discussion about the house had to be done...and i think they sould buy a new one...it's too painful for Jared to come back in their old house.
I loved the update, and i can't wait for the next one....i hope your computer "willl get better soon" :P
I never get tired of this story, it's original, well written and not disturbing despite the rape part...and i love it.
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Thanks! I hope so too. My bf is pretty good with computers so hopefully he'll be able to fix it (without the big price tag :P) Good news is that I have the beginning of the next chapter written so hopefully it'll be up before too long.
AW! Wow! Thank you so much! I'm so happy you think so and I hope that you will continue to think so highly of the story. Really, I'm flattered. :)
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can't wait for the next chapter!! hope your computer gets fixed soon!!
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Aw, yeah, Jay's pretty heart breaking right about now. And Jensen isn't completely aware of just how much trouble, emotionally and mentally, Jared is in right now but he'll find out soon and it's not going to be pretty. As for Tyler... I think this whole thing is going to make him grow up a bit even if Jensen and Jared never tell him the details.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'll try to update ASAP and I look forward to hearing what you think about the rest of the story. :)
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