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kellysparrow

{ The Darkest Of Nights Are The Best For Lovers; Jack/Boone }

Jul 27, 2008 16:47

Title; The Darkest Of Nights Are The Best For Lovers
Pairing; Jack/Boone
Rating; R
Words; 936
Disclaimer; I do not own them, I just like playing with them.
A/N; First time for this pairing as well. Loving that luau over at lostsquee. Written for janie_tangerine.

( He'd always thought of him as a naive young man who was in love with his sister. )

luau: 2008, jack/boone, fic: lost

Comments 4

janie_tangerine July 27 2008, 16:44:40 UTC

OMG thank you so much! This was just lovely and my OTP as well with a happy ending? *loves this really*

I really liked how you structured this one, your Jack POV was really good and I could totally see the action developing. Also, you have some awesome descriptions. Especially with Boone *cough*, there were some points that really had me. The way you tied it in canon felt smooth and the action flowed in a very good way. The way you portrayed Jack's feelings changing was effective and well, him waiting for Boone to arrive on the beach before sleeping was a great touch. And the following scene? woah, that was something hot and uhm, I think I'm in love with Boone having sort of the upper hand and you did a great job with the setting *fans herself*

The ending was just so sweet and I loved the point you made there. For writing it for the first time I think you did a great job with the pairing. Oh, and I'm in love with the last paragraph, oh yes. Thank you so much, I loved it! ♥

kellysparrow July 27 2008, 19:51:50 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it! This is probably the most elaborate comment I've ever gotten! :)

I'm really happy you thought I wrote him well, since I've never written them (as a pairing, that is) And as far as Boone goes, he never was one of my favourite characters, but I do miss him a little bit now he's dead :)

I actually wanted to do something with Boone dying, but this came out instead and I must say that slash is still more favourable than writing about dead ;)

You are very welcome and thanks again! :D

alemyrddin August 1 2008, 08:54:12 UTC

this was lovely. I liked very much how Boone changed thanks to his experience on the island, and he grew up and in the end it was him taking the initiative with Jack.
Also, the image of Jack's heart rate speeding up every time Boone comes out of the forest is very sexy. :)

kellysparrow August 1 2008, 21:42:27 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I've never been a great fan of Boone, but I did like how he changed after he saw that vision Locke gave him through that ew-thing on his headwound back in S1.

Yeah, don't you just love the idea of knowing someone's heart goes a little faster when they see you? *sigh*