Fic - Stupidity - P/R

Mar 16, 2010 10:26

Title: Stupidity (one shot)
Pairing,Character(s): Puck, Jess St. James, Puck/Rachel
Rating: R (for the F bomb)
Word Count: 308
Spoilers: 1x14 "Hello"
Summary: Puck confronts Jesse on his and Rachel's relationship.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters.
A/N: I'm a little unhappy with the ending; I've never really been good at wrapping things up. Any constructive criticism is welcomed and appreciated.

    Jesse St. James kissed Rachel goodbye, smiled and headed towards his car as she sped off out of the school parking lot.  He was almost to his car, when a deep, almost angry voice stopped him.
    “Hey.”
    Jesse turned, and gave a half-smile. “Hey.”  He proceeded to walk towards his car, but felt a strong hand on his shoulder.
    “Hey,” he said it more fiercely, loudly this time.
    Jesse looked the boy up and down.  Strong build, brown eyes, brown hair (if you’d even call that ridiculous strip down the middle of his head hair).  He could tell by the way he was crossing his arms that he wanted to show off his muscles.
    Without waiting for a response from Jesse, he said, “You need to back off Rachel.”
    Jesse smirked. “Why?”
    Puck rolled his eyes. “Oh, like you don’t know.” Silence. “You’re using her!  It’s obvious.  Obvious to everyone, except Rachel.  I mean, no one dates her unless they’re completely stupid.  Like Finn.  Finn is totally fucking idiotic.  All he notices about Rachel is that her body is bangin’ and that she smiles at him a lot.  You seem like a smart enough guy, and almost halfway sane, so there’s only one other reason you would date Rachel.  To use her.”
    Jesse rolls his eyes and shakes his head.  “I’m not using Rachel.”
    Puck laughs, loud and sarcastic.  “Yeah, and I’m not the most badass person in Lima!” He quickly hurries on when Jesse doubtfully raises an eyebrow.  “Look, you don’t have to tell her, or tell anyone what you’re doing, but just…let her down easy, okay?”  Noah turns to leave without waiting for a response.
    “What about you then?” Jesse asks.
    Puck turns.  “What about me?”
    “No one would come and…verbally attack me like that unless they had a thing for Rachel.”
    Puck just shakes his head and turns to walk the rest of the way back inside the gym for basketball practice.  "Maybe I'm stupid, too," he mutters to himself.

-fin-
 

puck/rachel, it's not obvious who my favorites are, puckleberry, fanfiction, puck is a badass, jesse st. james

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