Do you read Wil Wheaton's blog?
If not, you should. If you do, then you already saw this post about finding emotional resonance in technobabble dialogue.
He wrote the post from the standpoint of an actor delivering a scene, but it applies to authors too. Find the emotion in any scene--even an infodumpy one--and you'll make it better.
He wrote the post from the standpoint of an actor delivering a scene, but it applies to authors too. Find the emotion in any scene--even an infodumpy one--and you'll make it better.