NCIS PORNATHON OPEN!!!!!!

[kelly_girl]

We got some great prompts so lets start! In order to play, all you need to do is pick a prompt from below (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the hottest bit of fiction you can. Or you can make some sexy manips or drawings. That's all folks. Just produce some steamy, chair squirming, porn. Make it kinky or as subtle, or as explicit,

Comments

"Ulterior Motives," Crossover-Profit, Profit/Tony, information

[crimsonquills]

Sex with men was different than sex with women

Re: "Ulterior Motives," Crossover-Profit, Profit/Tony, information

[kelly_girl]

That? Kicked ass. Seriously. I loved it. The ongoing monologue and calculation in Profit's brain. He never turns it off and you have him down perfect. Loved his observation's about Tony.

But the best part is Tony at the end. You don't play a player and Tony excels at being that.

Beyond hot and i'm off to read it again.

Re: "Ulterior Motives," Crossover-Profit, Profit/Tony, information

[crimsonquills]

The ongoing monologue and calculation in Profit's brain. He never turns it off and you have him down perfect.

Yay! *grins* I was thinking of this kind of as practice for another Profit bunny I have. I was worried that I wouldn't be able to write Profit-POV porn because I like for my porn participants to be enjoying themselves and he seems pretty neutral about sex. But once I got going, it was disturbingly easy to write him. I mean, really, really easy. What does this say about me? *g*

But the best part is Tony at the end. You don't play a player and Tony excels at being that.

*grins* Profit always has everything worked out, but he doesn't always succeed. I wanted to make sure Tony wasn't just a victim here, and Profit doesn't know him well enough to account for everything, so it worked.

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Re: "Ulterior Motives," Crossover-Profit, Profit/Tony, information

[webbgirl]

Ooooo...yummy.

My brain is a bit too fried to give any coherent feedback, but this was fabulous.

[lillian13]

Oooh. There's not nearly enough Profit fic around.
I have seen comment fic broken up into parts, if that helps. (I'd love to see the Director's Cut of this!)

[crimsonquills]

Thanks! And I agree, there needs to be way more Profit fic. Fortunately, the popularity of Heroes practically guarantees some bleedover into Profit fandom. *g*

I figure I'll post the long version of this fic on Monday or Tuesday, after the Pornathon closes.

Personal porn star, Gibbs/DiNozzo, 'live porn show'

[kelly_girl]

Tony lay naked in bed and let one of his hands slowly sweep across his collarbone and then down to his chest. It was hot and he felt sweat gather on his skin. He placed one hand over his eyes as his other hand carded through his chest hair. Fingers lightly brushed against one nipple, and then the other. He’d been so horny all day, but he’d held off

Re: Personal porn star, Gibbs/DiNozzo, 'live porn show'

[crimsonquills]

Guh. Very nice porn! My favorite part? "Make you fuck yourself with a vibrator until the batteries run out. Then fuck you over and over until I can’t move."

You hit a serious, serious personal kink there. God, I'd love to read that written out as a fic.

Thanks for sharing!

Re: Personal porn star, Gibbs/DiNozzo, 'live porn show'

[kelly_girl]

Thank you. That line came out of nowhere but I like dirty talking Gibbs. He can come visit me anytime.

Re: Personal porn star, Gibbs/DiNozzo, 'live porn show'

[smackalalala]

OMG. I usually don't read a lot of Gibbs/DiNozzo porn, but DAMN. That was just hot and sexy and wow. My goodness. I think I have to go attempt to finish the piece I'm working on now. You've totally inspired me!

"Keeping Steady," Abby/Ziva, target practice

[smackalalala]

Ziva slid her body closer behind Abby, feeling the weight of the lab tech’s buttocks pressing against her pelvis. She curled her arms around the goth’s and gave her firm instructions. “You want to keep your hands steady. That’s the key. Slow and steady

Re: "Keeping Steady," Abby/Ziva, target practice

[kelly_girl]

Whoa. That was hot. Loved how it changed from target practice to hot hot sex. Ziva tried to resist but it is Abby. Loved both of them being aggressive and going for it.

Re: "Keeping Steady," Abby/Ziva, target practice

[smackalalala]

Thank you. :) It was quite fun to write. A little trying on the technical end of things at times, but fun nonetheless.

Re: "Keeping Steady," Abby/Ziva, target practice

[aries11]

I liked that one, too, and I'm not even much of a slash person! LOL.

'Black Magic Woman,' Crossover-Heroes, Abby/Nathan, one night

[kelly_girl]

Nathan laughed as Abby pushed him against her hotel door. Finally, he could get her clothes off, and touch her like he’d been itching to do for the past hour. He'd chosen an out of the way place and hadn’t regretted his decision yet. A hand squeezed his cock through his pants and he groaned

Re: 'Black Magic Woman,' Crossover-Heroes, Abby/Nathan, one night

[skripka]

you
rock

Re: 'Black Magic Woman,' Crossover-Heroes, Abby/Nathan, one night

[kelly_girl]

Thank you, sweetie!