Comments | kelleigh: Impersonal | Dean/Sam

kelleigh

Impersonal | Dean/Sam | NC17

Jan 27, 2011 12:25

IMPERSONAL
Dean/Sam. NC17. Spoilers up to 6x11.
Before Dean commences his 24 hours as Death, he needs to make sure Sam wants his soul back. Yeah, that goes well.
warnings. Guys being dicks. Slightly dub-con as no one clearly knows what they want. First-time wincest.

My salt_burn_porn prompt was I wanna hurry home to you, put on a slow dumb show for you ( Read more... )

salt burn porn, wincest, my fiction, one-shot

Comments 43

auroraprimavera January 27 2011, 20:01:49 UTC

Not only is this insanely hot - it's just so. UGH. BOYS. It hurts, but it's a lovely kind of hurt. Awesome job bb ♥

kelleigh February 9 2011, 17:25:55 UTC

I couldn't help this from hurting, just from the nature, and you know I hate doing that to our boys! But this was something I'd needed to write for a while, and I'm glad it finally came out!

auroraprimavera February 9 2011, 19:18:14 UTC

I know how that goes - even when we don't want to - we just have to. I'm glad it finally came out too! ♥

ratherastory January 27 2011, 20:02:22 UTC

*twists*

Gaah.

*twists some more*

Oh, this was brilliant but I kind of feel like I need to go watch Anne of Green Gables on loop for a while. Or maybe the Care Bears.

kelleigh February 9 2011, 17:28:12 UTC

Definitely need to watch something schmoopy and lovey after this, I agree! Thank you!

big_heart_june January 27 2011, 21:44:26 UTC

WOW. omg. *whimpers* DEEEEAN. SAAAAAM. Christ. I think you broke me, I'm all exhausted after reading this....the biting and the snarling and the rage and Sam's taunts and totally toppy!Dean just losing it...it's SUPER hott but so soooo achey at the same time. These lines were RIDICULOUS:

Rubbing Sam's come around the tight hole, forcing it up into him, Dean can't shake his eyes off the sight. Sam's quiet; this is beyond the reach of his foul-mouth. Sam takes Dean's ring finger with a gasp, barely holding the sound together. It's nothing like pleasure-Dean may even be hurting Sam-but Sam cracks with every half-thrust.

Sam's head falls between his arms. As Dean pushes forward, fucking his finger deeper into Sam's insane heat, his cock forces its way between Sam's legs. Sam reacts, bears forward, and every drop of Dean's blood is caught down in his dick with Sam's thighs as a tourniquet.

"Jesus fuck."

Dean's dick is wrapped up tighter than it's ever been inside a woman.

I think I'm all porned out now..:P Great job, hon! BOYSS. ♥

kelleigh February 9 2011, 17:29:14 UTC

Oh no! I didn't mean to break you! Just Dean, LOL. Thank you, bb!

grace_fully January 28 2011, 02:15:56 UTC

holy ASHKFSAAKLFJ ridiculously hot. what, even.

your winchesters are FUCKED UP, dude, and i love it. everything about it is so right, and angry, and completely heartbreaking.

"Can't you feel it missing?" / "No."

that exchange was so perfect i can't believe it's not canon. i can't believe it. what a vicious, cut-throat, desperate move for dean to make, and for sam's character to be pronounced so drastically different from the man we love. holy, shit. right between the eyes, thanks.

"That's your solution to everything," Sam spits, his tone unable to mask how pathetic he thinks Dean is. "If I'm not right according to you, just keep on hitting me."

God help him, that's all Dean wants to do. He's never successfully beaten anything out of Sam-sympathy, ambition, deviance, addiction-but it's hard to fight the urge, the need to lay Sam out.this was unbelievable, i don't even have words. i feel like you got dean so right here, and there is this underlying feeling that this sam shouldn't be the one to be calling dean out on it -- that's ( ... )

kelleigh February 9 2011, 18:08:00 UTC

You started this, Michelle! You with your "I want fucked up Dean being all toppy and Sam mouthing off," got me thinking about this scenario. So, all of this? Your fault.

Which is delightful, you should take full credit!

I wrote this because I wanted to see it on the show -- all of it. And while it would be better to see it acted out, getting all those issues out there, I'm not holding my breath. Show doesn't always deliver on the 1-2 emotional punches that it sets up, which in part I'm grateful for because it means we get to fill in the gaps and honestly, we sometimes do a much better job ;)

So thank you for this comment -- it comes when I needed it the most.

cordelia_gray January 28 2011, 03:54:29 UTC

Holy hell, that's hot. And fucked up, and miserable, and psychotically codependent, and hot, in this filthy desperate way.

"Don't do it, Dean. Don't make the deal if you want to have this again."

Gah! This is great stuff, there's just not enough S6 Wincest, and particularly not toppy!Dean s6 Wincest. The dynamic is so tragically believable, as you've written it.

kelleigh February 9 2011, 17:30:18 UTC

And fucked up, and miserable, and psychotically codependent, and hot, in this filthy desperate way.

EXACTLY what I was going for ;-) I never thought I could write s6 Wincest just because of how ridiculously messed up things were, so this was a challenge. Thank you so much!