Comments | kelleigh: Get No Harder [part one]

kelleigh

Get No Harder [part one]

Dec 04, 2010 10:07

( part one. )

my fiction, jay squared

Comments 11

saltnburnbaby December 5 2010, 02:29:11 UTC

TABBED!

sandymg December 6 2010, 19:02:46 UTC

Great set up. Totally, completely hooked. Fantastic character and world building. Poor Jensen. And really far from perfect Jared is a nice refreshing storyline.

Moving on now ...

saltnburnbaby December 8 2010, 03:44:32 UTC

Oh HOLY HELL!

Best fic I've read in AGES! Such a great setup. I am SO intrigued!!!

*loves*

Can't wait to read more!!!!!

kelleigh February 8 2011, 17:45:28 UTC

Awesome comment is AWESOME! \o/

Thank you, bb ♥

dont_hate_me01 December 11 2010, 10:15:32 UTC

Loved how you develoved the characters in this first part. Both Jensen and Jared growing with each other, learning things, getting closer - in a odd sort of way!

kelleigh February 8 2011, 17:45:02 UTC

Thank you so much! Jared and Jensen were definitely meant to grow with one another, sharing experiences to get themselves on better paths.

hannahbellejude February 7 2011, 18:56:01 UTC

I love your characters and the world you created but I am most enjoying your writing style. It is honest and melancholy and natural. Thank you!

kelleigh February 8 2011, 17:43:33 UTC

A wonderful comment to get, thank you! ♥ I'm so glad you're enjoying the story.