chocolate vanilla and missing strawberry

[keken]

neapolitan emotion
split in one
daily rotation
each perspective undone
joy or lament
all the same
daily repent
left insane
divided eyes
darkness and light
schizmed lies
traded at night
waking up myself
going to sleep someone else

--

this needs fixing...

Comments

[thickerthanair]

strawberry is the best part.

i don't think your writing needs fixing, i think it's your brain that's broken.

[deja_morte]

haha ... so funny how minds think differently.
i thought "this needs fixing" meant he needed to fix the 'problem' not the writing.

weird huh?

[thickerthanair]

i was right, says nathanael

[thickerthanair]

...i think.

[deja_morte]

nathanael ... what does "schizmed" mean exactly?

i wish i could write something beautiful.

[keken]

schized isn't actually a word, as our
dear friend pointed out to me. But
schism means literally to split (if
I'm not mistaken). Schizopherina is
a good example of word based on it,
meaning a split of the brain.

[deja_morte]

ok good. i thought i was stupid. :(