Prison Break ficlet: "The Formula"

[keerawa]

Fandom: Prison Break
Character: Mahone
Rating: PG
Challenge: Written for the malnpudl's Multi-fandom 'Secret Formula' flashfic Challenge
Length: 800 words
Summary: There's just one piece left to the puzzle.
Author's Notes: My first Prison Break fic! Beta'd by Steven. Spoilers for season 2. Feedback would be greatly appreciated, but I probably won't reply

Comments

[malnpudl]

Oh, cool. What a creative use of the prompt. Now I'm intrigued all over again.

[keerawa]

I was a bit disappointed that Mahone didn't figure it out. Thanks, mal!

[riskofruin]

Great little fic. I really like the way you show off Mahone's obsessiveness and the way his mind works. Very well-done, I hope you'll try your hand at more PB fic. In the meantime, I might just check out your Highlander fics :D

[keerawa]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, riskofruin. Mahone's an interesting character. Thank you for the comment, and have fun with the Highlander fics!

[ffutures]

Don't really know this fandom at all, but I liked the obsessiveness.

[keerawa]

*chuckles* It certainly does shine through, doesn't it? Thank you, Marcus!

[houses7177]

I don't know Prison Break, but I didn't have to to enjoy this fic. It's engaging, with enough of a hint of mystery to drag in people without any connection to the source material. Except, of course, that I still don't know what the formula means. *grumble* Thank you for responding!

[keerawa]

I'm glad you were able to appreciate it without knowing the show! I have the same complaint - I was really hoping that Mahone would tell ME what the damn formula meant...

Thanks for the feedback!

[sdwolfpup]

Finally had a chance to read this! I really enjoyed it - you captured Alex's obsession well!

[keerawa]

Oh, thanks! That's a high compliment coming from you!