My Heart Belongs To You: Pt. 5

[keepcalmn_aktf]

Author:KeepCalmN_AKTF
Title:My Heart Belongs To You
Length: Chaptered
Pairing:YunJae
Rating:G
Genre:au, fluff, romance, tragedy
Disclaimer:Read and enjoy - don't take credit for my work.
Warnings:I do not know the procedure of donating a deceased person’s organ, I am just writing this from my own imagination. I do not want to offend anyone. If it

Comments

[keepcalmn_aktf]

Thanks for the support, I'm glad you liked and enjoyed their cuteness!! xx

I understand completely. Honestly, I'm actually a little upset for posting this! I feel if I'd not posted it already, I could have added more to make it a better ending...more fulfilling in a way?? Let it be know that I, the author, am not happy with this at all!! Ugh! Sorry, I feel like I ruined it for everyone. I personally hate it when stories start off good but end in a crap way...and I think I did just that.

I really should have done that! Damn it. Well, at least this is experience for the future - Note to self: I CAN'T KEEP PLOTS SMALL!!! I have a habbit of babbling on and on...You're right, definitely too much crammed into one small part.

I guess my impending assignment deadlines didn't help either.

Epilogue definitely coming up soon! I'll take some time on it to make it good and to make up for the crappy ending. Also, I may do further drabbles in this serious...possibly.

Wow.See what I mean about blabbing. Damn I need to learn to stop writing so much! Did I just write you a whole essay..???? Sorry! xx

[theladysilver]

Nooo!! I don't think you've ruined this bb! But yes, you could have done better. Maybe you just got overwhelmed with the response and the pressure to post an update immediately got to you. But it hey, it doesn't have to end in a crappy way. You still have the Epilogue. You can still make it work!

I'm glad you understood what I meant. But you can always rewrite part 3 you know. Hehehe. I think the first two chapters were good. Chapter 3 is the one that needs working on. After posting the Epilogue, which I hope you'll take your time on writing, you can go back on Chapter 3 and rewrite. Branched it out to 2 or more Chapters to make it just right! :)

And yes, don't rush the Epilogue BB! Take your time. Don't post it till you yourself are satisfied! :D Oh! Doing drabbles is definitely a good idea! You can continue this verse with drabbles! XD It'd be nice to know hoow YunJae's life will be after getting together. Also, it'd be fun to see Yunho interacting with YooSuMin. Hehehe. I seriously do like this verse.

And oh, don't worry about writing me an essay! I think I did write you one with my previous comment and also with this one. Nothing to be sorry! I really like it when the author really takes the time to reply to my sometimes long comments. I also enjoy reading equally long replies from them. Hahaha!

[keepcalmn_aktf]

Yeah, thanks!
I've kinda put it to rest for a while because I need to come to a decision about the length. I don't think I'll post the epilogue until I've edited part 3c...or rearranged the parts completely...
Sorry if that's an inconvenience, but I need to know it's right before I go further and finish the story.
xxx

[theladysilver]

I think that's a really good idea! And bb, it's not an inconvenience at all. You're just doing you're best to make the story even better! I'm sure the reads will appreciate it more! Good luck on that one!! XD