FIC: Reckoning (Human Series)

[keelywolfe]

Title: Reckoning
Author: Keelywolfe
Fandom: Transformers: Bayverse
Rating: R
Series: Human series
Summary: Chapter 47 of the Human Series.

Comments

[linnet_melody]

*cheering* Go, guys, go!

[linchan]

Kick some decepticon afts guys! So exciting! *_________*

[xianghua]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

SO exciting. (I simultaneously LOVE and hate the way you've built the tension in the last few parts! ARGH.)

Also, have a cupcake for being awesome:
http://shinypie.com/pics/fanart/ani_wheeljack_cupcake.gif

[ext_210694]

Fabulous action sequence. Loved that you've made it so spare--basically horrific noise, screaming, stink, confusion, and absolute terror--which really works from a human perspective.

The dialogue between Epps and Sunstreaker was perfect. Now I want them to survive just so they can continue to cordially bitch at each other.

[romyra]

ohhhhh soooo much tension!!! I love it!