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keelywolfe

FIC: T-Minus (Human Series)

Apr 05, 2011 21:15

Title: T-Minus
Author: Keelywolfe
Fandom: Transformers
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Sam/Bumblebee, Sideswipe/Sunstreaker, Ratchet/Optimus, Ironhide/Lennox, Mikaela/Prowl (Whew. I think that's everyone.)

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[fandom] transformers, [series] human series

Comments 20

xianghua April 6 2011, 01:17:31 UTC

SQUEE!

Cannot read till I get home but SQUEE THERE IS NEW FIC.

keelywolfe April 6 2011, 01:22:47 UTC

I hope it's worth the wait. :)

darkdanc3r April 6 2011, 03:05:21 UTC

Woot! So glad to see a new fic, and really looking forward to the upcoming mission chapter!

keelywolfe April 8 2011, 15:22:44 UTC

Thank you! I can only hope the next chapter lives up to the anticipation. :)

mmouse15 April 6 2011, 04:24:59 UTC

ZOMG, that's awesome! I love how you've managed to fit all the pairings in here (Lennox and Ironhide were my favorite this time, though Ratchet and Optimus was fantastic) and get us all ready for the big mission.

I hate jinxing myself, so I'm going to cross my fingers and hope this wounded mech is who I hope it is. ;D

keelywolfe April 8 2011, 15:24:23 UTC

Lennox and Ironhide actually caught me by surprise, but I find myself liking them more and more. *G*

I hate jinxing myself, so I'm going to cross my fingers and hope this wounded mech is who I hope it is. ;D

I suppose it would be mean to chant, "I know something you don't know!" ;)

femme4jack April 6 2011, 05:12:56 UTC

Oh, I LOVE the way you used the countdown for this chapter, the mixture of anxiety, boredom, and hubbahubba. Ratchet and Prime are making me giggle. Ironhide and Lennox are making me snicker and pant. And PRIMUS - two Bumblebees in a closet!!!!! Holy Hot!!!!

Yes, rather nicely done. Can't wait for the next one.

keelywolfe April 8 2011, 15:25:23 UTC

Thank you! Now all I have to do is make it through the next chapter, after spending all this time ramping up the anticipation. *G*

ext_210694 April 6 2011, 05:41:21 UTC

Awesome chapter! Bee with Sam's parents was unexpectedly sweet, and yep, sometimes Sam does come up with exactly the right thing to say...

Ratchet and Optimus are deliciously hot, but wow, Ratchet is really getting himself twisted around about this. And Ironhide and Will! Definitely a "just go with it, don't think about it" moment for Will.

Great job driving up the tension with the countdown, too -- I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

keelywolfe April 8 2011, 15:25:39 UTC

Thank you so much!