Fanfiction: Soap Opera Does Happen (chapter 5/8)
i finally have the time to update!! sorry for taking SOOOOOOOOO long..
Title : Soap Opera Does Happen (chapter 5/8)
Author : keeconk
Pairing : TaDaiki (Takaki Yuya x Arioka Daiki)
Rating : PG-13
Disclaimer : i only own the plot..
Summary : they finally went out on a date.. thanks to "papa" hikaru..
A.N. : it's un-beta'ed..
( Chapter 1: The Closet ( Read more... )
Title : Soap Opera Does Happen (chapter 5/8)
Author : keeconk
Pairing : TaDaiki (Takaki Yuya x Arioka Daiki)
Rating : PG-13
Disclaimer : i only own the plot..
Summary : they finally went out on a date.. thanks to "papa" hikaru..
A.N. : it's un-beta'ed..
( Chapter 1: The Closet ( Read more... )
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Especially when the both of them pretended to be still asleep! XDDD And the 7 members surrounding and poking them. Heehee... XDDD
Ryutaro’s upper lip twitched in annoyance seeing the lovey dovey people in front of him. Keito somehow blushed seeing the intimation the two showed, while the other three seemed so amused that the two BEST members finally managed to settle things up between themselves.
“I’m too young for so much gayness,” complained Ryutaro.
Haha poor Ryutaro. XDDD Keito blushing!!! *FLAILS* XDDD
“I think my fingers started to type something weird on someone’s phone. And oops!! I accidentally sent it to Daiki,” Hikaru passed by and whispered to Takaki, half giggling.
I TOTALLY LOLED AT THIS!!! XDDD I LUFFLES HIKARU IN THIS!!! XDDD HEEHEE... SO SNEAKY!!!
As he finally started to eat his meal, Takaki suddenly feel something in between his legs.I swear... you MADE MEH HAVE DIRTY THOUGHTS ABOUT THIS!!! @ ( ... )
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ryutaro surely gives out the impression that he's acting older than he is, well at least from my point of view.. and no one can do it like he does at being sarcastic i guess.. hahaha..
*kicks jen for dirty thoughts!!*
oh come on!!! u do write fluff and u r good at it!! trust me! :)
love u too!! *huggles*
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BWAHAHAHA!!!!!!! THIS IS SUCH AN AMUSING CHAPTER!!!!!! ESPECIALLY BEST!!!!!! AND OMG!!!!!!! HIKARU!!!!!!! LMAO!!!!!!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDD
OMFG OMFG OMFG!!!!!!!! THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED DAI-CHAN AT THE END IS JUST...HFEAIJFAWJFOIWAEJFJEWAFJIOEWJFOIW!!!!!!!!! TOO CUTE!!!!!!!!! <3333333 I LUFFLES IT!!!!!!!!
So, is this the last chapter? Or are there more?
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i love hikaru in here so much!! he's a dork!!! but i love dorky hikaru anyway.. XXD
haha.. it's not the last chapter.. thank u for reading and commenting, ani!
*huggles*
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*huggles*
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AT LASt YOU'VE UPDATED *TEARY EYED*
I'VE MISSED YOU SOOO MUCH *HUGS*
I'M MAD AT YOU! *POUTS*
BUT SINCE THIS CHAPTER IS SOOO AWESOME..... I FORGIVE YOU ^_^
“I’m too young for so much gayness,” complained Ryutaro.
Hahaha. Poor Ryutaro but if I know he's not innocent for his age. LOL
“Ta.ka.ki~.. how dare you.. Dai-chan is my wife. Huaaaaaa… Mama.. why did you choose him over me?” Hikaru fakely cried as he put his arm around Takaki’s shoulder.
Oh My, Hikaru is still on to that thing for Dai-chan. Hahaha
I love this part and I love Hikaru for this =)
It was as if Takaki was hypnotized by what Hikaru was whispering, he automatically walked towards the youngest member of BEST. He froze for awhile, without saying anything. Daiki turned his head to Takaki and blushed instantly.
OMG! Hikaru has this kind of power! Sugoi, it gave me an idea for a fic. LOL
“I think my fingers started to type something weird on someone’s phone. And oops!! I accidentally sent it to Daiki,” Hikaru passed by and whispered to Takaki, half giggling. ( ... )
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u quoted like ALOT!!!! *hugs renz for this*
don't be mad at me.. T___T
i'm trying my best to update as fast as i can.. uni is killing me.. hahahaha..
yay!! glad u forgive me!!
dorky hikaru is surely something!! and i'm a sucker for dorks!
oh yes yes takaki.. those are just dai-chan's charming points.. hahahaha..
love u too!! *hugs renz back*
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Hahaha. Gomen for my very "short" comment ^^ But
that how much I love this and love you *hugs*
I can never be md at you and take your time cox I completely understand your reasons ^_^
Hai! Hai! Dai-chan is like a book of charming points that all what they all said is not yet complete ^_^
The whole of Dai-chan is sooooo ADORABLE, CUTE, CHARMING ^_^
LOVE YOU MORE *hugs back*
But to tell you the truth, I thought this is already the end so when I saw that it has 3 more chapters I kinda feel like something bad will hapen that it will take that long before it ended X___X
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will see what might happen, okay??
hahahaha..
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is there gonna be more chapters?
and i bet u don't even know me xD...
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and yes i have no idea who you are.. so would u tell me??
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