Als ich die Geschichte sah, Fuehlte ich mich wunderbar. Mein Herz braucht Liebe taeglich, Sonst ist das Leben unertraeglich. Doch nicht irgendeine Liebe, Nicht irgendjemands wilde Triebe. Rote Haare so seidig und samt, Sich verlierend in den Augen von Herrn Charmant. Daher lese ich gerne deine Geschichten, Du besizt die Gabe mich stets zu beschwichten, Wenn sich mal zu viel Merder'sche Liebe, In deine glaenzenden Aufzeichnungen verirrte. Mark und Sydney sind eine Wucht, Addison und Derek meine groesste Sucht. Meredith schick mal lieber fort, Zusammen mit Geoffrey an einen fremden Ort. Daisy kann bleiben, das suesse Kind, Einen Namen fuer sie erfind ich geschwind. Wie kann sie nur heissen, die Suesse? Margarete? Nein. Viel eher Luise. So sag ich ole, es ist nun vorbei. Viel Wort und viel Witz, voll Bloedelei.
The longest? I pretty much think so. Right about now you probably think 'wtf did she just write?!'. Close? Here's a little challenge on my part because I know you'll be up for it. If you find out what I just typed and can tell me, I'll make sure to reply in rhymes to every single update.
When I saw history, I felt marvelous. My heart needs love daily, otherwise the life is intolerable. But not any love, not somebody wild impulses. Red hair so seidig and including, itself losing in the eyes of Mr. Charmant. Therefore I read gladly your stories, you always besizt the gift me to beschwichten, if times too many Merder' love erred, into your shining recordings. Marks and Sydney are a force, a Addison and a Derek my largest craze. Meredith times rather sends away, together with Geoffrey to a strange place. Daisy can remain, the sweet child, a name for it invents I geschwind. How can she only be called, the sweet one? Margarete? No. Much rather Luise. Thus say I ole, it is now past. Much word and much joke, fully Bloedelei.
Talk about lost in translation. It's turned out surprisingly well, but still there are a couple of things that just don't work the way it's been translated. Me <3 it!!!
There's a typo in besizt. It should be besitzt (first t is missing). 'Geschwind' is colloquial, try 'rasch'.
I'm gonna offer a translation at some point...once you're done working on it.
But damn, It looks like I'll be doing my post in rhymes, I bet I'll regret the offer a million times. I'm not the world's greatest poet, you must know, I'm not even close, I'm sure it will show. I will try my best, give it a shot, To amuse you and all readers a lot, Effort and nonesense, I'm good to go. With chateau and hoe comes the flow. The middle could break it I'm well aware, But all fair is faul and all faul is fair. It leaves me none to say; my guilty plea. Don't you look forward to rhymes from me?
When I saw the story I felt wonderful my heart need love everyday otherwise life is not bearable but not anyones love not anyones wild drive. red hair silky & smooth get lost in the eyes of Mr. Charming thats why I love your stories you have the gift to pacify me, when to much merder love got lost in your magnificent notes Mark and Sydney are smashing Addison and Derek my biggest addiction send meredith away together with geoffrey to a foreign place daisy can stay the little cute kid I make up a name for her fastly what can her name be, of the sweety Margarete? No rather luise Now I say old its over plenty of word, plenty of humor, full of oafishness.
Fuehlte ich mich wunderbar.
Mein Herz braucht Liebe taeglich,
Sonst ist das Leben unertraeglich.
Doch nicht irgendeine Liebe,
Nicht irgendjemands wilde Triebe.
Rote Haare so seidig und samt,
Sich verlierend in den Augen von Herrn Charmant.
Daher lese ich gerne deine Geschichten,
Du besizt die Gabe mich stets zu beschwichten,
Wenn sich mal zu viel Merder'sche Liebe,
In deine glaenzenden Aufzeichnungen verirrte.
Mark und Sydney sind eine Wucht,
Addison und Derek meine groesste Sucht.
Meredith schick mal lieber fort,
Zusammen mit Geoffrey an einen fremden Ort.
Daisy kann bleiben, das suesse Kind,
Einen Namen fuer sie erfind ich geschwind.
Wie kann sie nur heissen, die Suesse?
Margarete? Nein. Viel eher Luise.
So sag ich ole, es ist nun vorbei.
Viel Wort und viel Witz, voll Bloedelei.
The longest? I pretty much think so. Right about now you probably think 'wtf did she just write?!'. Close? Here's a little challenge on my part because I know you'll be up for it. If you find out what I just typed and can tell me, I'll make sure to reply in rhymes to every single update.
XD
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Not any closer? Damn those bloody Germans.
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My heart needs love daily, otherwise the life is intolerable.
But not any love, not somebody wild impulses.
Red hair so seidig and including, itself losing in the eyes of Mr. Charmant.
Therefore I read gladly your stories,
you always besizt the gift me to beschwichten,
if times too many Merder' love erred, into your shining recordings.
Marks and Sydney are a force, a Addison and a Derek my largest craze.
Meredith times rather sends away, together with Geoffrey to a strange place.
Daisy can remain, the sweet child, a name for it invents I geschwind.
How can she only be called, the sweet one?
Margarete? No. Much rather Luise.
Thus say I ole, it is now past.
Much word and much joke, fully Bloedelei.
I'm working on it
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There's a typo in besizt. It should be besitzt (first t is missing). 'Geschwind' is colloquial, try 'rasch'.
I'm gonna offer a translation at some point...once you're done working on it.
But damn,
It looks like I'll be doing my post in rhymes,
I bet I'll regret the offer a million times.
I'm not the world's greatest poet, you must know,
I'm not even close, I'm sure it will show.
I will try my best, give it a shot,
To amuse you and all readers a lot,
Effort and nonesense, I'm good to go.
With chateau and hoe comes the flow.
The middle could break it I'm well aware,
But all fair is faul and all faul is fair.
It leaves me none to say; my guilty plea.
Don't you look forward to rhymes from me?
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I felt wonderful
my heart need love everyday
otherwise life is not bearable
but not anyones love
not anyones wild drive.
red hair silky & smooth
get lost in the eyes of Mr. Charming
thats why I love your stories
you have the gift to pacify me,
when to much merder love
got lost in your magnificent notes
Mark and Sydney are smashing
Addison and Derek my biggest addiction
send meredith away
together with geoffrey to a foreign place
daisy can stay the little cute kid
I make up a name for her fastly
what can her name be, of the sweety
Margarete? No rather luise
Now I say old its over
plenty of word, plenty of humor, full of oafishness.
closer :P???
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sigh. no. But you never said I couldn't have help:P
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Who did help you with it?
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