Learn To Knock

Jun 19, 2013 22:06

Title: Learn To knock
Pairing: Jalex
Rating: NC-17
POV: Jack
Summary: "Without any hope of finding a partner, I gave up and slid my hand through the waistband of my boxers and tried to get a good grip of my leaking dick."
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone in this fanfic. Honestly. Only the plot line is mine. :) This never happened.
WARNING: sexiness, ( Read more... )

top!alex, top!jack, pairing: jalex

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atlaregay June 23 2013, 03:27:40 UTC
You're really welcome, haha.

Like I said, you can submit the link to it on alltimefanfiction so more people can read it! And then of course proceed to brush up on your new skills by trolling their story ideas to satisfy other people's smut needs. It doesn't always need to be super-kinky, sometimes just a different setting can spice it up, like beach sex. I believe there was actually a request for beach sex, haha!

Oh, one more thing: explore different pairings. Jalex is a popular one but it can be fun to adventure with different ships. A couple of my other ATL faves are Merrikat (Jack/Zack), Flykarth (Flyzik/Alex) and Flykat (Flyzik/Jack).

A lot of people love varied pairings, or even pairings of All Time Low with people from other bands (a favourite of mine right now is Jack and Josh Franceschi). However there's usually a lack of fics for the less popular pairings, so if you like one, you should write it! People would love you for it.

As for the message you sent me about not understanding BETAs, a "BETA" is someone used, for example, when a new video game is being put on the market. The BETAs will test the game before it's released and report back with any bugs they find or anything that seems wrong with it or things that could be improved, etc.

So applying that to writing, a BETA is essentially like an editor. They'll check all your spelling and grammar mistakes for you because sometimes it's difficult to spot in your own writing when you're scanning it over and over, and maybe input a thought or two to help make it the best it can be. You can credit the BETA up in the info part of your fic, under the "Author" part!

(Also, you said you'd read pretty much everything on Wattpad... alltimefanfiction, is, obviously, going to be a great place for you to search for new fics to read! And ~shameless self-promotion~ maybe you could give any of mine a read! I can't promise the smuts will be amazing, I haven't posted one in a while and I'm working on improvement but, happy reading!) xo

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kebencaruso June 23 2013, 04:20:20 UTC
Oh. Okay.. :) I guess americanaffair offered her/himself to be my BETA. She's(i'll just address her as SHE) really sweet and her fics are good. :) i kinda like Merrikat. Maybe I could try and write some of it. And, idek what i was thinking coz tomorrow's my first day of school and a story came in my mind, like, jalex incest.. i kinda like it. :) I dont know.

No, i've read your jalex fics :) They're amazing. That's why i added you as a friend coz I saw most of your fics and i liked it so much. Honestly, at first you were an ATL hater coz your username is, like, atlaregay, but i saw your fics and they're amazing. Tbh, (call me a perv) but it actually turned me on. XD

Oh well.. Uhm, one more question, can I have more than one BETA?

Thank you again so much for helping me. Really. I wont let you down. :)

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atlaregay June 23 2013, 18:29:18 UTC
Ah, americanaffair (I believe it's she) is an AMAZING writer. She's not afraid to venture into a world of fetishes and kinks for her writing and I love that. She'll be a good BETA for you.

Incest fics are perfect if done well. Have you read any? I could refer you to a couple if you like.

Wow, thank-you so much! Haha, my username's just poking fun. But seriously thanks, that's so cool. I'll be posting another smut this evening! I posted an angsty Flykarth most recently but this smut I've been working on since last year so I'm really excited to post it!

More than one BETA? Like, on one fic or for several? One will be enough for one oneshot but if you write another one and would like the same person to BETA again, you could ask them nicely, or try someone else. Different BETAs will have different ideas so you can pick and choose who you like! Some might contribute ideas for you or some might just check spelling and so on.

But really, thank-you so so so much for enjoying my writing, it means a lot! I don't like No More Waiting very much, looking back on it, but a lot of people really loved it so I won't delete it.

Where Do You Get Off was originally bottom!Alex but I changed it months later and did a bit of editing and I'm pleased with it now.

You Scared and Teasing To Please are two of my faves, I think, as well as I Won't Be Satisfied Until I'm Tongue-Tied With You - I like all those ones best, I'm the most pleased with them for sure.

But I think my actual favourite piece I've done so far is probably All The Best Lies Are Told With Fingers Tied. Not a smut, obv, but I like to write more serious stuff sometimes.

ANYWAY I'M RAMBLING SORRY. xo

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kebencaruso June 23 2013, 04:27:45 UTC
my favorite actually is No More Waiting :) and Where Do You Get Off, Making Noises. You Scared. Teasing To Please and Sex It All Better. Haha. I saved it on my phone so I can read it whenever I feel upset. :) it's working btw :) You're really awesome at wht you're doing. I hope you make more. :) Please. Haha. Thanks! :)

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