Crack Fic

[kc_evans]

Words: 3,233
Rating: PG
Warnings: Crack-fic, unbeta-ed, slight character OOC

Yep, more crack. Don't ask me why I can't write a semi-serious fic anymore. Maybe it's because school is frying my brain - and rather successfully, I might add.

Comments

[umarekawareru]

I'm still laughing from this. Oh Ryoma, I understand you - dentists are the ultimate form of evil. Thankfully I never had sugar taken away, but if that had happened I might have died, and I'm not nearly as obsessed as Ryoma. He probably had a bad time, so maybe I shouldn't have laughed as hard as I did XD Atobe taking away all the Ponta, that was so funny. And Ryoma trying to bribe him with a date, haha. I so loved this fic, dear - the characters' disgrace is something that always cracks me up (must be the little Fuji in me). If I had to quote all the lines I liked, I would have to space it over 3 comments, so I'll pick my favourites.

“Fortunately, we have something called ‘water’. It is good for you and sugar-free. Sit down, your breakfast is getting cold.” The joys of sarcasm. Oh, Tezuka.

Tezuka was torn between incredulousness and exasperation. Echizen still had his cavities and they were now 40,000 yen poorer. Ironic how Echizen Nanjiroh had gotten the best deal out of them all. Somehow I can imagine Nanjiroh doing this XD XD

School-induced psychosis, yes please. I'm hoping we will be stuck with you for a long time. <3 <3

[kc_evans]

Dentists are evil. I refused to step into one for like 10 years and ate as much candy as I wanted! :D

Poor Ryoma. I was so evil to him and took away his Ponta. I felt bad. Sorta. But not quite enough to not write this fic. :D

Hanging out with Ryoma can really turn a person sarcastic, even someone like Tezuka. At least, that's how I see it. :D And I still hate that stupid last sentence of the story but I don't know how to change it! >.< Grr.

Thanks for your lovely comments! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll be around for a while yet, spreading bad fanfic to yous alls so don't worry! :D

[umarekawareru]

You're welcome ^_^ I don't see what's wrong with the last sentece though - it seems a neat way of finishing to me. I usually struggle a lot with closing (and opening) sentences, but I think you did a good job here. Reading about Nanjiroh's little plot was the perfect funny note to close the fic, I reckon.

I hope we have more "bad fanfic" of yours soon. I'm looking forward to it <3 (And on a completely different note, everytime I see your icon I can't help thinking how much I love it XD)

[kc_evans]

I just think there's something wrong with that last sentence. I like the concept, too, but it's worded weird. And now it's going to bother me until I fix it. >.<

I've gotten all my icons from ego_elite. I love that particular icon, too. It's so very true when it comes to their relationship. :D