i love the concept. somehow when i read the summary i felt so much angst LOL~ though i still hope for a happy ending for this fic! :D hope you'll be able to write this story. It is really interesting.
Here are just some general thoughts about amnesia fics:
Well, it seems to me that in general the amnesia part takes up around 3/4 of the fic normally in these kinds of fics, meaning it is not until the near the end of the fic that Kame will gain his memory. Often there is the how far will Jin go (romantically or sexually) with Kazu scene or scenes while he still has amnesia.
And I think it may be important to get the two of them out of London and back to Japan pretty quickly so that they can interact with the other JE.
And i guess the main thing is how broken their relationship was before and can it be repaired.
And you might want to think about unsent letters or a diary or something to prove how Kame might have felt about Jin in secret before the amnesia, or maybe he told just one person about how he felt.
These are just general impressions. Hope they help. If you feel that you can write the other fic easier, maybe write that one for now, Whatever you end up writing will be great.:D
yay!! thank you for pointing some stuffs...that really helps... somehow i think its a challenge to write amnesia fics...especially angsty one... that's why im amazed to those angst fic writer... and that's why im thinking not to make this angst or drama...hehe
for now my mind just wont cooperate with me..hehe i think imust read more akame fics and watch fanvids... maybe i just need akame inspiration..xDD
we'll actually I want to know why does jin expect kame to be mad at him. second how they meet maybe they buying the smae t-shirt when they see each other again. and being kame as a fanboy he follow akaneshi to every where he goes. xd
I love the summary it really have potential for a good fic.
spoiler~!!:D i dont mind though:Dkazu_chan_loveOctober 19 2011, 12:32:25 UTC
first hmm let say due to their past:D 2nd well KAT-TUN will be in london because johnny said so...:D they are protecting kame from the stress that the media may cause him..:D then they saw jin in london and yes your right...being kame as a fanboy he follow akanishi to every where he goes..hehe:D
i love the summary it really have potential for a good fic oh now im pressured..xDDD kidding..:D
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somehow when i read the summary i felt so much angst LOL~
though i still hope for a happy ending for this fic! :D
hope you'll be able to write this story. It is really interesting.
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but the present time wont be..:)
ill do my best..:D
thanks for dropping by♥♥♥
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Well, it seems to me that in general the amnesia part takes up around 3/4 of the fic normally in these kinds of fics, meaning it is not until the near the end of the fic that Kame will gain his memory. Often there is the how far will Jin go (romantically or sexually) with Kazu scene or scenes while he still has amnesia.
And I think it may be important to get the two of them out of London and back to Japan pretty quickly so that they can interact with the other JE.
And i guess the main thing is how broken their relationship was before and can it be repaired.
And you might want to think about unsent letters or a diary or something to prove how Kame might have felt about Jin in secret before the amnesia, or maybe he told just one person about how he felt.
These are just general impressions. Hope they help. If you feel that you can write the other fic easier, maybe write that one for now, Whatever you end up writing will be great.:D
Hugs and Hearts :D :D :D
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yay!! thank you for pointing some stuffs...that really helps...
somehow i think its a challenge to write amnesia fics...especially angsty one...
that's why im amazed to those angst fic writer...
and that's why im thinking not to make this angst or drama...hehe
for now my mind just wont cooperate with me..hehe
i think imust read more akame fics and watch fanvids...
maybe i just need akame inspiration..xDD
*hugs*♥♥♥
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second how they meet maybe they buying the smae t-shirt when they see each other again. and being kame as a fanboy he follow akaneshi to every where he goes. xd
I love the summary it really have potential for a good fic.
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2nd well KAT-TUN will be in london because johnny said so...:D
they are protecting kame from the stress that the media may cause him..:D then they saw jin in london and yes your right...being kame as a fanboy he follow akanishi to every where he goes..hehe:D
i love the summary it really have potential for a good fic
oh now im pressured..xDDD kidding..:D
thanks for dropping by dear♥♥♥
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Hope to see this fic soon. joke. take your time.
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