Another snippet from Jane's Death part 4: Sex Life

Feb 07, 2010 13:47

Thanks to pirbid for inspiring me to pick up my story again.

Okay, here's a scene from about the middle of part 4, the next day. A grocery trip. Hee. Even a grocery trip is diff with Jane around.

What do you think?
even the grocery store is an adventure with Jane around... )

mentalist, series: jane's death, cho/jane, jane/cho

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Love Cho's cucumber! pirbid February 8 2010, 00:05:14 UTC
LOL, that was really good fun. Cho's comeback was priceless. Loved it. The end was sweet, thanks to Jane, again. Good work!

I just posted another comment without realizing I wasn't logged in, but I hate to be an 'anonymous', so posted again. ;)

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Re: Love Cho's cucumber! kaytee4ever February 8 2010, 00:14:43 UTC
Hee! Thanks. Actually, Cho's comeback about the condoms was the first thing I wrote in this part! hee. :)

Aw, yeah, Jane has his moments.

So glad you like!

Thanks to SB being online, I got another scene written. woot!

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Re: Love Cho's cucumber! pirbid February 8 2010, 00:53:56 UTC
Yeah, SB and you seem to make a good TM fic combo. I'll be awaiting any new bits any of you may be posting.

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Re: Love Cho's cucumber! kaytee4ever February 8 2010, 01:34:45 UTC
hee. yes, SB and I and TM fic are a good combo. Thank goodness we're finally on chat for the first time in a week! :)

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Re: Love Cho's cucumber! kaytee4ever February 8 2010, 02:39:26 UTC
Okay all of part 4a is posted now:
http://kaytee4ever.livejournal.com/436593.html

Enjoy! More soon. :)

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