Comments | kayliemalinza: TW fic: Psychotic Outbreak Due to Hob Nobs (R, 1,620 words, Jack/Ianto and Ianto/Toshiko, Pre-S1)

kayliemalinza

TW fic: Psychotic Outbreak Due to Hob Nobs (R, 1,620 words, Jack/Ianto and Ianto/Toshiko, Pre-S1)

Dec 04, 2008 02:19

Not the big J/I/T fic I'm working on, soz. Just a bit of fun ( Read more... )

tw: pre s1, tw: tosh/ianto, fic: r, fic, tw: jack/tosh, tw: jack/everything ever, tw: jack/tosh/ianto

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kel_reiley December 4 2008, 07:38:42 UTC

hah!
rabid!tosh
and jack's last line, perfect

kayliemalinza December 4 2008, 07:45:47 UTC

Hee, thanks.

captain_bookcat December 4 2008, 07:40:27 UTC

I read it! I like it! It's late and I'm pretending to do homework right now, so I can't really leave much of a comment beyond this!

nonetheless:
funny. possibly even brilliant. :DD

kayliemalinza December 4 2008, 19:01:47 UTC

You don't even know much about Torchwood, do you? The urge to avoid homework must have been particularly strong last night. :/ ::petpet:: Anyways, thanks!

captain_bookcat December 5 2008, 00:27:15 UTC

I've watched a lot of Dr. Who (10) and have seen a few episodes of Torchwood, so while I'm not really in the fandom or anything, I'm not exactly ignorant. ^_^

but yes, mad avoidal urges last night. :P
XD

kayliemalinza December 5 2008, 00:38:36 UTC

Oh, goody! What episodes of Torchwood have you seen?

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misswinterhill December 4 2008, 07:57:16 UTC

Oh, gold. Very believable even though the situation was absurd. I love your work so much!

kayliemalinza December 4 2008, 19:02:49 UTC

Ooh, thank you! My philosophy is, it's even funnier if you can believe it. Which explains why I write fic for Crack-on-Screen, aka Torchwood. >P

lilithbint December 4 2008, 07:57:58 UTC

All their reactions were spot on,
Ianto constantly apologising, Jack making it up as he went along and adding in the innuendo at the same time and Owen's comment was priceless... I'd like to know who he didn't want there as well for it to be his dream and then turning back into a doctor again.
And rabid Tosh was just too gorgeous.

kayliemalinza December 4 2008, 19:04:56 UTC

All their reactions were spot on
Ooh, thanks so much!

I'd like to know who he didn't want there as well for it to be his dream
Oh god, me too. I can see it going either way, depending on what Owen had to drink before passing out that night. ^^

And rabid Tosh was just too gorgeous.
Not blatantly offensive? Oh, phew.

dvanulya December 4 2008, 08:59:45 UTC

This is excellent and hysterical.

And why do I love the idea of Jack "just breathing" on Ianto so much?

kayliemalinza December 4 2008, 19:07:29 UTC

why do I love the idea of Jack "just breathing" on Ianto so much?
Personally, it reminds me of the scene from NuWho "The End of the World" where Nine is giving people "the air from my lungs" because he forgot to bring any proper presents. >P Also, I can imagine Ianto's eyebrow quirk as he tries to figure out what Jack is doing.

Thanks for commenting!