Comments | kayliemalinza: TW fic: "The Vegetable Crusade" (PG, Jack/Ianto and Tosh, 1,295 words)

kayliemalinza

TW fic: "The Vegetable Crusade" (PG, Jack/Ianto and Tosh, 1,295 words)

Oct 10, 2008 00:29

Title: The Vegetable Crusade ( Read more... )

tw: tosh/ianto, fic: pg, tw: jack/ianto, fic, tw: jack/tosh/ianto, tw: s2, torchwood

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kayliemalinza October 10 2008, 05:30:37 UTC

Hee, thanks. I'm not sure how seductive Jack is, though. Seriously. "I'm scared of thunder?" What kind of pick-up line is that? >P

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kayliemalinza October 10 2008, 05:36:34 UTC

You know what? You're exactly right. Luckily he's already dating Ianto, so there's no big pressure for the pick up lines to work. :P

pecos October 10 2008, 05:28:02 UTC

What a delightful little story! You paint wonderful pictures with words.

kayliemalinza October 10 2008, 05:30:56 UTC

Oh, thanks so much! I do try to fit some imagery in there. ^_^

spoggly October 10 2008, 09:02:51 UTC

Aww, that's adorable! I loved your dialogue, too!

kayliemalinza October 10 2008, 11:20:28 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

angelnimp October 10 2008, 12:30:59 UTC

This is just so adorably lovely :)

kayliemalinza October 10 2008, 12:43:57 UTC

Thanks!

I think Jack would be one of those dads where if you fought against him he'd lay down the line, but if you were sweet you could get anything you wanted. :P

adafrog October 10 2008, 12:49:20 UTC

awww...so very cute. Thanks.

kayliemalinza October 10 2008, 12:53:52 UTC

You're welcome! Thanks for commenting. ^_^