Fic: The Truth Is... (White Collar; Stargate SG1)

[kaylashay]

Title: The Truth Is...
Author: kaylashay
Rating: FR13
Disclaimer: I'm not USA, MGM or whoever else owns the shows, so I don't claim to own them.
Pairings: None
Fandoms: White Collar; Stargate SG1
Genre: Gen
Warnings: None
Word Count: 5,046
Beta: azraelz-angel
Written For: wc-reverse-bb based upon the awesome Mozzie artwork by leesa-perrie

Summary: When Mozzie heard the name, he knew he had to

Comments

[sheenianni]

SO. FREAKING. AWESOME!!!

Can I just say I love you? Well, your story anyway :D

I've been looking forward to this story ever since I saw the artwork, but this surpassed all my expectations. Your Mozzie voice is spot on; I love the idea of him and El watching the show and Moz reaching all the rigt conclusions. I don't know Stargate, but it didn't stop me from enjoying this immensely from the beginning to the end.

The aliens? Nicely creepy. Mozzie's fantastic as the knight in shining armor (bald, short and chubby) trying to protect Neal and Peter when he knows he won't be believed. I also love that he called the government for help - because Mozzie's paranoid, and he may be a conspiracy theorist but we know that he's also brilliantly smart and can be practical when push comes to shove.

Seriously, this is such a brilliant Mozzie-centric fic. And there definitely isn't enough Mozzie-centric fics.

I liked your other characters too and their moments with Mozzie. I loved that Moz told what's-his-name to call him if there was an paocalypse (heee :D ) and that the government agent like Moz. Love the implication that the show leader might be Mozzie's family. And all the details... Mozzie liking Neal's balcony (and wine). Mozzie updating the security now that he was justified. The implied friendship between El and Moz, and the deep love that Mozzie has for Neal (and his caring for Peter) that has him step into the lion's den to discover the truth.

I could continue gushing, but I guess I'll do that in private :D

Wonderful story. It's made my day. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

Awwww, Mozzie and aliens!!!

[kaylashay]

Thanks for the epic review!! I think this is one of the longest I've ever received! :)

Mozzie is a hard guy to write, so I'm glad he came across as himself. And Mozzie does make a nice (bald, short and chubby) knight in shining armor. If Neal (and Peter) only knew the truth!

And my head cannon always has Mozzie and El as friends. I think she like conspiracy theories too.

[kaylashay]

I don't know Stargate, but it didn't stop me from enjoying this immensely from the beginning to the end.

I'm also glad you gave it a read without knowing the show. Luckily, I didn't really go into great depth on the Stargate end of things. The big thing is that Martin Lloyd who is the creator of Wormhole X-Treme! was played by Willie "Mozzie" Garson. And Martin Lloyd was actually an alien living on Earth. There is so much to play with on that angle. Especially since Martin was a heavily paranoid guy, just like Mozzie. :)