Before the Clock Drops - Oneshot

May 04, 2008 12:55

Title: Before the Clock Drops 
Fic Challenge: 050. Lost, Heechul/Kyuhyun (4/100)
Author: kayjayloves
Chapter: 1/1
Pairing: Heechul/Kyuhyun (could be platonic?)
Band: Super Junior
Genre: angst
Rating: PG
Warning: cussing, Kyuhyun in the hospital
Disclaimer: *sigh* No, no owning ):

Synopsis: Heechul sails in the door past the protesting nurse, ( Read more... )

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mrsedjack May 4 2008, 20:07:36 UTC
Me ish first to comment on teh lovely ficcu. >:D

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mrsedjack May 4 2008, 20:20:01 UTC
:O! -speechless-

-wipes eyes- This is too beautiful for words. I love how you managed to include all of the members and the second album too - all the little things.
And I am so in love with your writing style. S'not fair. I want to write like that as well. D:
Well. At least Kyuhyun is fine now. ♥ It's been over a year! :O

May I mem this? :D

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kayjayloves May 4 2008, 20:29:17 UTC
D: *hands you kleenex*

Kyaaa, thank you so much *____* And yeah, Kyuhyun is fine now <3

Of course you can *_* *honored*

<33 for the comment~

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kayjayloves May 4 2008, 21:09:42 UTC
XDDD Gah, I always love your comments so much <33333

Yeah, my favorite thing about this was getting everyone in it in their own way I'm biased, Kibum's part was my favorite to write And waa, don't be weepy D: *hands tissues*

<3333 LUSMM

and get on msn sometime D: i'm lonely XD

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shieldkitten May 4 2008, 23:17:15 UTC
(“Sing.” Yesung glances at you in surprise. “Sing,” you repeat. Because you can’t.)
My favourite part.

Ah... This story is incredible. You draw such a clear picture of Kyu's emotions, and peppering each line with individual recollections of the other members like that... ♥

Thank you for writing this, it was heartwrenching in an entirely good way, though I think if I had read this this time last year I would probably be a sobbing mess right now. Oh.

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kayjayloves May 4 2008, 23:26:51 UTC
Ah man, I didn't even know Suju at this time last year, but learning about the accident was so painful later; even after I knew it was all okay now. I don't think I could've brought myself to write this then XD

I'm so glad you liked it, and such a lovely comment :O!

<333 for the it~

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kayjayloves May 4 2008, 23:27:11 UTC
<333 for the it? >_> 'scuse me

**** <333 for it. XDDD

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shieldkitten May 4 2008, 23:32:01 UTC
I found out about Suju right around the time the accident occurred, but didn't realise they'd had an accident(s, of course, Heechul's too) until a few weeks before their second album came out, and I was just... :O That adorable 'that's cool!' boy got broke? T______T noooo.

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kayjayloves May 4 2008, 23:28:15 UTC
uwaa *hands you tissues* thank you :O

<333 for the comment!

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redeyedrobot May 5 2008, 03:03:08 UTC
"You stretch a smile at him - wonder if his eyes always burned like that."

Easily my favorite part. This really struck me, how real it sounded. UGH, this whole thing is just beautiful. Much much love, darling. Write mooooore! >< <3

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kayjayloves May 7 2008, 18:16:24 UTC
*bounces* thank you dear ^^

<333 for the comment~

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