fic for v-day. n'aww.

[kaydeefalls]

I was bound to actually write a Firefly fic sooner or later, I guess.

Solar Cycle
by kaydee falls
Zoe/Wash, PG-13
written for rivendellrose in the Zoe/Wash ficathon

Comments

[bunniewabbit]

Oh, that was wonderful. You got their voices and the whole rhythm of everything just right. Very nice!

[kaydeefalls]

Thanks! :D

[yubsie]

OH hee, that had it all! The humour, the tension, the cuteness!

[kaydeefalls]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked.

[stormkpr]

You already know what I think, but I'll comment anyway. :-)

Love it! The plot is fantastic and realistic; everyone is in character. Your writing style is excellent. I like the insight into Zoe and Wash that you show. You really captured them.

It was also neat how you added Jayne in there too. Good use of most of the characters (while keeping the focus on Z/W).

[kaydeefalls]

Thanks again for the beta, I really appreciated it! :)

[razycrandomgirl]

Uh I loved this story! The whole thing is awesome and great! I loved the intro of Jayne> Loved Wash punching him. Well, I did, and I'm not about to un-marry him, so unless you have any useful advice, sir, I'd thank you not to interfere."

He blinked at her. "That time of the month, too, huh?"

Ohhhhhh I wanted her to punch him sooooo bad.

I loved it you did a great job!

[kaydeefalls]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[razycrandomgirl]

No! Thank you!

PS I love Coupling!

Fic: Solar Cycle

[secondsilk]

Oh my goodness, yay!
Wash punching Jayne is fabulous. Tying it in with that scene is great. And the conversation with Kaylee, and Zoe learning things, and working out what she hadn't said.

*loves*

Re: Fic: Solar Cycle

[kaydeefalls]

I'm glad you liked it. :) Thanks!