State of the Muse
So, I posted Kaydee's bio and stuff over on oc_analysis. I got some feed back and while she's not Suetastic, she does have Sue tendencies. This is the post.
What I think I'm going to be doing is stripping her of some of her angsty past, probably the abusive father. He'll most likely just be a big jerk and not actually abusive. She'll still hate him and all, but she'll feel guilty that he's gone. This needs more developing.
I may also be stripping the Fae part, since I haven't done anything with that yet and it's on the bottom of my list. However, I think she'll still be adopted because that's interesting.
If anyone else has any suggestions, I'd love to hear them.
What I think I'm going to be doing is stripping her of some of her angsty past, probably the abusive father. He'll most likely just be a big jerk and not actually abusive. She'll still hate him and all, but she'll feel guilty that he's gone. This needs more developing.
I may also be stripping the Fae part, since I haven't done anything with that yet and it's on the bottom of my list. However, I think she'll still be adopted because that's interesting.
If anyone else has any suggestions, I'd love to hear them.